January 2023
Four-line contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, January 2023, has the proper formatting and announces that the new year will bring you, and I guess the rest of us, deeper into this aging conspiracy.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This four-line poem, January 2023, has the proper formatting and announces that the new year will bring you, and I guess the rest of us, deeper into this aging conspiracy.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hi Bill, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Sherry SG
I love how you made the syllables fit into that constraint with a sweet, simple expression of a most universal. human desire!
I find this form of poetry hard to write but you have inspired me. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I love how you made the syllables fit into that constraint with a sweet, simple expression of a most universal. human desire!
I find this form of poetry hard to write but you have inspired me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Dear Sherry, thanks for your comments and review. Glad I was able to bring you some inspiration. Dove
