Passage of Light
A short poem.9 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
YES! Jesus is the Way, the Truth, the Life, the Light . . . . Your concise but powerful poem has captured the very essence of the Lord and His power, His love, and His guidance of His children.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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YES! Jesus is the Way, the Truth, the Life, the Light . . . . Your concise but powerful poem has captured the very essence of the Lord and His power, His love, and His guidance of His children.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much! It is an honor!
Comment from Zue65
This is an amazing Tanka poem, and the accompanying picture of Jesus with His bright light surrounding and above the clouds is a fitting description of the message you intended for the readers.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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This is an amazing Tanka poem, and the accompanying picture of Jesus with His bright light surrounding and above the clouds is a fitting description of the message you intended for the readers.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We find light in our faith or in our inner strength of mind and you managed to bring us some hope with your words here, I enjoyed your positivity, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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We find light in our faith or in our inner strength of mind and you managed to bring us some hope with your words here, I enjoyed your positivity, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Tanka poem about the passage of light. And that light is Jesus Christ our Lord! Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This is a very nice and well written Tanka poem about the passage of light. And that light is Jesus Christ our Lord! Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much!
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You are so welcome! I hope you had a very happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Wow. That is such a beautiful picture. The word were well written.
They both complimented each other very well.
Thank you for sharing,
Good luck in contest
Write on brother write on
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Wow. That is such a beautiful picture. The word were well written.
They both complimented each other very well.
Thank you for sharing,
Good luck in contest
Write on brother write on
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you and thank you for the good luck wishes!
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🙏💕
Comment from nomi338
this is true for those who believe in him and do their best to follow him. For those who make fun of him, and reject him, their end will not be happy or productive.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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this is true for those who believe in him and do their best to follow him. For those who make fun of him, and reject him, their end will not be happy or productive.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
It sure makes a difference when finds Christ, the love of God and His peace passes all understanding, this is beautifully written Raul, an excellent post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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It sure makes a difference when finds Christ, the love of God and His peace passes all understanding, this is beautifully written Raul, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
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Most welcome
Comment from RodG
Raul, this spiritual poem will appeal to many Christian readers because you assure them God is always watching and loves them. But your last line confuses me. In lines 1-2 you say the "passage of light is where God will always be." Is that Heaven? Must one die to find "the way" to God?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Raul, this spiritual poem will appeal to many Christian readers because you assure them God is always watching and loves them. But your last line confuses me. In lines 1-2 you say the "passage of light is where God will always be." Is that Heaven? Must one die to find "the way" to God?
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Celyn
This is a good poem that follows the syllable rules for a Tanka well. The subject matter says it all really but I think that your third line sounds a bit odd. Did you mean to write 'Never fear to him at all'? Should it be 'Never fear of him or from him' perhaps instead.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This is a good poem that follows the syllable rules for a Tanka well. The subject matter says it all really but I think that your third line sounds a bit odd. Did you mean to write 'Never fear to him at all'? Should it be 'Never fear of him or from him' perhaps instead.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I have made the changes.
