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A win-win appetite

one benefit of being alive

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Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Thanksgiving, although now passed, will come again.
In the meantime?
Christmas is around the bend
Eating all over again!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022

Comment from JoannaN
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This poem has more meanings that only one. Thanksgiving feast as a way to satisfy our appetite, love as a way to satisfy our appetite for life, the feast as a way of spreading love. "Be love~ with insight." - this is a great motto.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2022