Unsolicited
a 5-7-520 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our children have a habit of melting our hearts and those sweet words have melted yours here and I enjoyed your few words of love, so very sweet, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Our children have a habit of melting our hearts and those sweet words have melted yours here and I enjoyed your few words of love, so very sweet, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 poem on what you love. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. What's not to love about Liam? He is an adorable kid who gives out "I love you's" with no prompting.
I would extend the poem box by going to the last word in your poem and hitting enter a couple of times. You will have better spacing at the bottom of your poem. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem on what you love. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. What's not to love about Liam? He is an adorable kid who gives out "I love you's" with no prompting.
I would extend the poem box by going to the last word in your poem and hitting enter a couple of times. You will have better spacing at the bottom of your poem. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sandra, for the helpful and kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Awww, so very cute.
This is a great 5 7 5 contest entry. It's light yet serious if that makes sense.
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Awww, so very cute.
This is a great 5 7 5 contest entry. It's light yet serious if that makes sense.
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Douglas, for the great review.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful to receive such a tender whisper of love, and so meaningful. A beautiful photo to accompany your thoughtful words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Beautiful to receive such a tender whisper of love, and so meaningful. A beautiful photo to accompany your thoughtful words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from jessizero
This was so sweet, and your syllable count was correct. It's wonderful when children are young and innocent and it's not yet uncool to love their parents (or aunt in my case). Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This was so sweet, and your syllable count was correct. It's wonderful when children are young and innocent and it's not yet uncool to love their parents (or aunt in my case). Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jessizero, color this great review.
Comment from Zue65
Oh my, who will not enjoy reading this poem. The picture of the boy is cute and so irresistibly innocent. Any heart will be melted by this whisper of love. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Oh my, who will not enjoy reading this poem. The picture of the boy is cute and so irresistibly innocent. Any heart will be melted by this whisper of love. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, nassus, for the great review.
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Oh my, I totally love this. So so precious. Keep those words safe in your memory.
Children grow so so fast. You truly captured this perfectly.
Thank you for sharing.
I am certain you will have a Blessed Day of Thanks tomorrowð???
Write On
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Oh my, I totally love this. So so precious. Keep those words safe in your memory.
Children grow so so fast. You truly captured this perfectly.
Thank you for sharing.
I am certain you will have a Blessed Day of Thanks tomorrowð???
Write On
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, for the great review.
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Have a Blessed Day of Thanks💕🙏😋
Comment from Ricky1024
This contest entry was short and to tht point.
The Love for a grandfather by his grandchild..
Rich in Theme and Imagery it also read well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This contest entry was short and to tht point.
The Love for a grandfather by his grandchild..
Rich in Theme and Imagery it also read well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ricky, for the great review.
Comment from RodG
What is more welcome than an unsolicited "I love you," especially from a child? This moment of love is beautifully conveyed in seventeen syllables. Rod
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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What is more welcome than an unsolicited "I love you," especially from a child? This moment of love is beautifully conveyed in seventeen syllables. Rod
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Rod, for the great review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Very sweet little 5-7-5
I am wrestling a little as to whether it truly fits the condition of being about something (not someone) that you love. I guess your argument would be that it is the words/event that is loved rather than the child.
That being the case I would suggest that this has a very good chance of doing well in the contest.
Good luck.
Steve
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Very sweet little 5-7-5
I am wrestling a little as to whether it truly fits the condition of being about something (not someone) that you love. I guess your argument would be that it is the words/event that is loved rather than the child.
That being the case I would suggest that this has a very good chance of doing well in the contest.
Good luck.
Steve
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I assumed that as well, Steve. Thank you for giving this a look and for the good thought.
