Activate The Intellect
A poem,45 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
There is a lot of hidden and hinted at mating references in this piece of work.
The poem has an incredibly smooth flow, almost lyrical in format, that made it a most enjoyable read.
My favorite line:
Do not abandon Nature
but accommodate Her plan,
True Dat!
Good work. Thanks for sharing!
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There is a lot of hidden and hinted at mating references in this piece of work.
The poem has an incredibly smooth flow, almost lyrical in format, that made it a most enjoyable read.
My favorite line:
Do not abandon Nature
but accommodate Her plan,
True Dat!
Good work. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This shows a person who is well educated or likes to read, like me. Well done, though here and there a word just sits poorly for me, such as
make that bleeds away THE blight (is the needed- or instead a) and ... stanza four line five: to find perfection binds the fit; idk. It's likely me and the thing re: opinions is everyone has one like ... you know. You obviously had a reason. No ill intent intended. :-)
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This shows a person who is well educated or likes to read, like me. Well done, though here and there a word just sits poorly for me, such as
make that bleeds away THE blight (is the needed- or instead a) and ... stanza four line five: to find perfection binds the fit; idk. It's likely me and the thing re: opinions is everyone has one like ... you know. You obviously had a reason. No ill intent intended. :-)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lee,
This poem flows well and reminds us that we should be thankful for the beauty of nature and the joy and peace in can bring us in the hectic and violent world.
This must have been hard to write with its different rhyme scheme and use of cross and internal rhyme.
Keep writing and say healthy
If you celebrate it, Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
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Hi Lee,
This poem flows well and reminds us that we should be thankful for the beauty of nature and the joy and peace in can bring us in the hectic and violent world.
This must have been hard to write with its different rhyme scheme and use of cross and internal rhyme.
Keep writing and say healthy
If you celebrate it, Happy Thanksgiving.
Joan
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Activate the Intellect, is full of well-worded and rightly rhymed philosophy which could be a guide for readers to both improve their lives and others´.
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This poem, Activate the Intellect, is full of well-worded and rightly rhymed philosophy which could be a guide for readers to both improve their lives and others´.
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Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
Comment from Cogitator
I get it. We should team up to create a masterpiece of understanding life and how to create future. If we were engines, we would definitely be in tune. Great post!...John
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I get it. We should team up to create a masterpiece of understanding life and how to create future. If we were engines, we would definitely be in tune. Great post!...John
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
