Activate The Intellect
A poem,45 total reviews
Comment from pookietoo
This is beautiful poem a lot of thought went into it. Keep up the great work best wishes and good luck in the contests you enter. Keep sharing and smiling.
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This is beautiful poem a lot of thought went into it. Keep up the great work best wishes and good luck in the contests you enter. Keep sharing and smiling.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Sanku
reach out to feel the breeze as it drift by...I loved this line. Sadly very few has the time or desire to do that.
we have already abandoned the nature, haven't we?
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reach out to feel the breeze as it drift by...I loved this line. Sadly very few has the time or desire to do that.
we have already abandoned the nature, haven't we?
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very thoroughly written with powerful words and thoughts. A poem with an urgent message and a plea. If man was smart enough to see the damage, then they would act wisely.
Great post
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Very thoroughly written with powerful words and thoughts. A poem with an urgent message and a plea. If man was smart enough to see the damage, then they would act wisely.
Great post
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
easy:
I wish more people would take the time to think about their actions and words ahead of time - but what I tend to witness is more and more people winging it. Common sense is definitely not a common thing. Thanks for sharing. jan
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easy:
I wish more people would take the time to think about their actions and words ahead of time - but what I tend to witness is more and more people winging it. Common sense is definitely not a common thing. Thanks for sharing. jan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was fun and enjoyable. I guess, quite a task to active one'intellect (lol). Liked the sophistication of your lines, your great rhymes, imagery, the topic, the deliverance, everything.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us once more.
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This was fun and enjoyable. I guess, quite a task to active one'intellect (lol). Liked the sophistication of your lines, your great rhymes, imagery, the topic, the deliverance, everything.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us once more.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
Comment from Reese Turner
Say, you took this one to a higher level! You touched many points within easy meter and rhyme - makes it easy for guys like me to grasp. Going to take some time and thought on this one, but I enjoyed your witness here.
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Say, you took this one to a higher level! You touched many points within easy meter and rhyme - makes it easy for guys like me to grasp. Going to take some time and thought on this one, but I enjoyed your witness here.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
Comment from amahra
Loved the poem and a couple of things also liked below:
Internalize the beauty that
surrounds your sacred place, [Love these for open lines.]
that forged the futile fumbling found today. [forged, futile, fumbling, found...great alliteration]
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Loved the poem and a couple of things also liked below:
Internalize the beauty that
surrounds your sacred place, [Love these for open lines.]
that forged the futile fumbling found today. [forged, futile, fumbling, found...great alliteration]
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your first line is powerful, and a gripping start to this poem. I love the rhyme form, it flows perfectly. I have been wondering for a long time if we have gone beyond the point of no return. We seem to be the only life on earth that has the awesome ability to destroy everything we touch, alive or otherwise. Nature has it right, and is fed-up with our destructive attacks on her. Now she is fighting back, and we should watch out, she is far more powerful than us, so called, intelligent, civilised beings. Very well done, EE. I enjoyed reading your poem. Sandra xx
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Your first line is powerful, and a gripping start to this poem. I love the rhyme form, it flows perfectly. I have been wondering for a long time if we have gone beyond the point of no return. We seem to be the only life on earth that has the awesome ability to destroy everything we touch, alive or otherwise. Nature has it right, and is fed-up with our destructive attacks on her. Now she is fighting back, and we should watch out, she is far more powerful than us, so called, intelligent, civilised beings. Very well done, EE. I enjoyed reading your poem. Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
Comment from RainbewLatte
Wow. The imagery in this is impeccable! From the first line "Internalize the beauty that surrounds your sacred place" I was hooked. And throughout the flows, it didn't disappoint.
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Wow. The imagery in this is impeccable! From the first line "Internalize the beauty that surrounds your sacred place" I was hooked. And throughout the flows, it didn't disappoint.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I love these kinds of poems with the rhymes within the lines. They appeal to my musician's ear (because I always read poetry aloud, expressly for the purpose of "feeling" the rhythm and rhyme.) This one was delightful on both counts. So glad I got to read this today.
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I love these kinds of poems with the rhymes within the lines. They appeal to my musician's ear (because I always read poetry aloud, expressly for the purpose of "feeling" the rhythm and rhyme.) This one was delightful on both counts. So glad I got to read this today.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
