"The Book of Death"
Viewing comments for Chapter 83 "The Dilemma Within Me"Is the living really alive and living?
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Comment from BOO ghost
This looks like a free verse story poem. The green and black makes it easy on my eyes.
Nor her manner that I had now forelorned. I like this word forelorned. I'm a word guy.
Yes, we've been sitting on the couch for so long and finally?
Saturday Night Live was over.
I remember watching Saturday Night Live when I was younger. Pretty entertaining during those days. Lot of guests.
Good read Dr. Ricky
Collect your doubloon!
BOOtastic!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This looks like a free verse story poem. The green and black makes it easy on my eyes.
Nor her manner that I had now forelorned. I like this word forelorned. I'm a word guy.
Yes, we've been sitting on the couch for so long and finally?
Saturday Night Live was over.
I remember watching Saturday Night Live when I was younger. Pretty entertaining during those days. Lot of guests.
Good read Dr. Ricky
Collect your doubloon!
BOOtastic!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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Thanks Boo and have a Turkey or two?
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Cass Carlton
dear dr ricky i was just passing and noticed you had spelled "dilemna" with a double m. Perhaps things are different here in "Ozz" but I've always spelled dilemna with an m followed by an n then the a at the end. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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dear dr ricky i was just passing and noticed you had spelled "dilemna" with a double m. Perhaps things are different here in "Ozz" but I've always spelled dilemna with an m followed by an n then the a at the end. cheers Cass
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I basically write everything verbally and then edit so when I talk it in it came out with the double m and thanks for sharing.
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This free verse poem definitely seems full of emotions, ranging from sadness, loss, regret, and resignation at the very end. I think anniversaries are particularly hard to get through, even years or decades later. Thank you for sharing this event.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This free verse poem definitely seems full of emotions, ranging from sadness, loss, regret, and resignation at the very end. I think anniversaries are particularly hard to get through, even years or decades later. Thank you for sharing this event.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
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This date November 23rd, 2022
Marked 19 years since her death.
December 6th, 2022
70 years since Carolyn Ann's birth.
Thanks and have a Blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Julie G1
This poem conveys your message and tale so well. Sending the poet empathy. Your use of language to express the story in verse was well chosen. I hope you can keep on writing verse.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This poem conveys your message and tale so well. Sending the poet empathy. Your use of language to express the story in verse was well chosen. I hope you can keep on writing verse.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thanks Julie and as for my current writings.
About 875 Books and hundreds of thousands of Poems.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am so sorry for your loss Ricky and for story poems relives the tragic scene as you called for help for your wife. Life can be very cruel and my prayers are with you. You must now look after yourself and try to see the goodness in your own life and indulge yourself in the life you have left, we grieve and we tire of the sorrow, I wish you all the best, my prayers are with you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I am so sorry for your loss Ricky and for story poems relives the tragic scene as you called for help for your wife. Life can be very cruel and my prayers are with you. You must now look after yourself and try to see the goodness in your own life and indulge yourself in the life you have left, we grieve and we tire of the sorrow, I wish you all the best, my prayers are with you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much dolly for your condolences and concerns.
Time is the great buffer.
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Comment from Zue65
My heartfelt condolences for the death of your wife Carolyn Ann about 8 months after the death of your only son. Your poem described a heartfelt account of the shocking event in your family. The narrative in your poem is quite effective. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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My heartfelt condolences for the death of your wife Carolyn Ann about 8 months after the death of your only son. Your poem described a heartfelt account of the shocking event in your family. The narrative in your poem is quite effective. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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The idea behind this is to educate people that life goes on for the living.
And thank you for your condolences much appreciated.
Doctor Ricky 1024