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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Resounding Tears"
My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
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So sad, heartbreaking, to lose someone dear especially a child. Each day is a struggle with tears just beneath the surface. Tears are so like rain and you did a great job. I am so sorry for your loss!

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
    Thanks for sharing your review and thoughts.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from prettybluebirds
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As you know, I can relate to the pain you have been suffering for so long. It will always be there, we must simply learn to live with it as best we can. I can feel the pain behind every word you write. Hang in there, my friend.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
    I know you relate to all my pain and I know all yours also and thanks for stopping by pretty blue birds.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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A virtual six for this one. this poem reads like a biblical lament or psalm pleading with God for relief from suffering and pleading for justice and the coming of God's presence into the psalmist's life. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Why so thanks of you Theodore.
    Why both appreciate your review.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Zue65
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It shows how deep is the effect of the death of your son. He has been your subject in many of your writings, be it in poetry and in prose. This post also affirmed your deep faith in God and how you seek His guidance in every stage of your life. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much nassus for taking your time to review my work.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I know of two people on here who have both recently lost a son. It must be unbearable to know they passed away before you. Parents are supposed to go first. Your poem speaks of the pain of getting through without your dear son, and I feel so bad for you. Keep writing, he's watching and will be there when God calls your name. Sending love and hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Child losing?
    My speciality
    Life giving?
    My son Jason.
    Thanks Sandra and have a Blessed Evening.
    Doctor Ricky1024