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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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I very much enjoyed this poem (promoted to a mere 52 cents to prove your point!). I wish there were some way round this buying reviews syndrome that means the worst of writing often reaches the ATB list. Sometimes I boycott anything promoted ABOVE 60 cents, but I don't think one person will make any difference. Kate xx

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thank you very much for your wise words (and actions). That?s about my top offering for poems, for longer prose perhaps a bit more. Yes, and poor writing moves up the ranks quickly if one is willing to pay for it. It?s a flawed system.
Comment from Zue65
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Oh wow, it is so true. FanStorian writers become so dependent on getting reviews to promote their poetry and prose and even have to directly purchase member cent pumps to improve their rank. I think everybody does here. It feels like the rankings do not really reflect the real creative talent of those who deserve it. I do not question the talent of the Fan Story writers. They are all amazing. But something is amiss here, getting your poems and stories to number one slot will invite more reviews and eventually improve one's rankings. I agree, can we just write for our own pleasure instead. Yay, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thank you Nassus for an insightful review. I refuse to pay high to get reviews, and I am not much interested in winning either, although it is nice. But not at the expense of my personal integrity.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Very nice use of the prompt! I haven't get that way on this site.

Winning is great and fun, but it's always been about the feedback for me.

Had some negative influences that Left me yearning for positive feedback

Not to mention that my writing and grammar has improved greatly! Yes, your poem points out that we are all on a path here at FS.

Nicely done.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thanks so much Douglas. Thoughtful review. Thank you Dolly for your thoughtful words.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem matches the prompt well at is witty too. It shows maturity to know that needing to win ruins the fun of things. Writing is first for yourself and not for gain.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck with the prompt.
Happy Thanksgiving
Joan

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    That?s a great review, Joan! Thanks so much. Appreciated.
Comment from bob cullen
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What a great attitude you have. And while I agree it's not all about winning, it is nice to win occasionally. But it is just as important to compete, because competition maintains a healthy blood flow and blood flow ensures a strong heart.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Thank you, and you are perfectly right. Yes, it is nice to win, but one shouldn't obsess about it. It's very tongue in cheek. I never pay top money to get reviews, on principle, and while a win feels good, it's not a need. Thanks for your thoughtful review - I appreciate it.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Very clever, playing on the egos of fellow writers. (smiley face here)
But I wouldn't call it lazy to back away from an incessant drive to win.
Nice rhyming.
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Lol. Thank you for your super review. I actually never pay big bucks for reviews and don't really mind whether I win or not. Occasionally I've been disappointed not to place, but equally often amazed to place. It's very tongue in cheek, as I know there are some people who try to win at any cost. I had fun writing it!
Comment from Celyn
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I think that this poem describes in detail how some people feel when they first join something like Fan Story and how they then evolve into a more serious poet - competitions can get hold of you. The poem reads well and the rhyming and rhythm are good. It is also amusing so good luck with it - maybe it will win.
Celyn

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Lol. Thank you. A super review. I never offer the big money for reviews, and I don?t have a compulsion to win (but some do, so it?s very tongue- in cheek). Thanks for your good wishes. It was fun to write.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    Lol. Thank you for your super review. I actually never pay big bucks for reviews and don't really mind whether I win or not. Occasionally I've been disappointed not to place, but equally often amazed to place. It's very tongue in cheek, as I know there are some people who try to win at any cost. I had fun writing it!