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Depression meets Anxiety

Depression/Anxiety intertwine

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Comment from susand3022
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Charity, you are having a day, aren't you? I hope you can find your way through it all. It sounds like you're trying to carry a lot. I'd ask if you have a therapist, but they're harder to come by these days than silver pennies.
So far as the drugs are concerned...
Having been on neurological drugs for most of my life, I feel safe in saying the following
If what you are taking is no longer working, you may as well have your doctor take you off it. Find something that does. Your brain chemistry does alter over time as your body chemistry changes during your life. First with puberty, then again during your early 20s, then again during menopause years. You may actually find that you need adjustments during those times to any drugs you take that alter brain chemistry. Also, your brain can get used to some things, I think. I've taken things that have worked for a time, then after a couple of years, not so much anymore.
So, maybe it's that. Could be the Paxil and whatnot just aren't your thing anymore and it's time to put them on the shelf.
Try some holistic stuff... can't hurt. Scented candles, or aromatherapy. (maybe Santa will bring you a massage chair! ... I say this because people with anxiety don't usually want to go out for a massage!)
Whatever you do, don't skip out on the Dr. visits, and DO get out regularly. It will make all the difference in the world.
My sister wouldn't go to the doctor. For 7 years her kids begged her. Her meds ran out, she didn't have them renued because she wouldn't go back. Her anxiety killed her at 58.
Don't be its victim, Charity.
If you need someone to speak with, let me know, you can have my number. Sometimes anonymous is best.
Susan :)

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    I appreciate you sharing your story and reaching out to me. My struggles, pain and sorry is helping so many people know they aren't alone. Also giving them hope. That is what keeps me going.
Comment from MissMerri
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Charity, as I often tell you, your poetry makes me so sad, I'm hesitant to read it, but when I do, I am always impressed with your ability to put into words the feelings and experiences you endure, day after day. I would like to think this is not always true, but you tell me it is. I liked how you ended this poem because, as you know, I firmly believe Jesus is the answer to the burdens, the disappointments, the depression, and the anxiety that plague us all from time to time, and some more than others. Jesus is the great healer and has the answers you seek. I will keep praying for you.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    All my poems are true, never fiction. My poems are based on my struggles and sometimes about struggles and theenvironment I'm close around/or encountered. How's your granddaughter?
Comment from nomi338
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See. Since you already know. We war against spirits, and powerful persons who sit in high places. The battle plans cannot be to fight them using weapons that they control. We must fight them with unassailable weapons. Our minds, in harmony with our bodies and our soul.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Thank you. It's always good to hear from you. How are you holding up?
reply by nomi338 on 06-Dec-2022
    Still breathing, still writing, still thinking. How about you?
Comment from Teri7
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Charity, This is a very well written poem you have penned about depression and anxiety. You used very good descriptive words about something that is very real. I love you this -In Jesus name, depression get thee behind.

love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate you always reading my poems.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is very sad, Charity. I feel for you and the depression/anxiety you are continually facing. I hope you feel better soon. This is well written and speaks loudly for all of us who have problems with either depression or anxiety or both such as you have. I only wish I had a magic wand to wave toward you and wish the blues away even for a day.
Jesse

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    You are so sweet.
Comment from Zue65
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This is definitely a very dark poem. The angst and pain of the writer pour like water in every line. I can visualize too, the cry of desolation and utter despair of the writer. Charity perhaps turning to God will help. Nothing is impossible with Him, cast all your burdens to Jesus and you will find the rest you needed. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Wow. I have never suffered from depression but it sounds very rough.

I really can't even imagine the emotional turmoil but you poem helps present it.

One minor catch :
Mentally burnt like a overdone roast.
(Grammatically the 'a' would be 'an' )
Just my two cents.

Great work here.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
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I'm back young lady. And I can hardly wait to dig into this one. The title alone intrigues me.

Mentally burnt like a overdone roast. Should be (an) not (a)
Incidentally, that was the only problem I found throughout the entire piece. Excellent job.

Great line: "Spiritual pills I need to get back taking." Very unique and individual. It's lines like this that keep me coming back.

Another great, very unique, but telling line is:
"Please can you snort my painful lines."

It is so full of imagery and meaning. One might have to search but I get the message

What a strong, meaningful ending Charity, "In Jesus name..." I can't say enough about how good this one is. You spell out the continuous problem that must face so many people on a daily basis, and you do it so creatively. My only prayer is that you have excaped this never-ending spiral and this is not a personal testimony.

So good, so descriptive and so dark. I loved it.

Gary M

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Wow I'm flattered. Only 1 spell check error. I missed you. I'm glad you are back somewhat doing your master reviews. You are so good at it. I've been praying for you. Much love.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Agonizingly painful.
Emotionally wrenching.
It's hard to witness someone's pain like this without wanting to wrest out part of my joy in offering to you.
I can think of a dozen remedies that work for me, but also two dozen ways to confound them all.
Philippians 4:8-9 should help.

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Another poem that would do well in a slam. Charity, you need to branch out into some lighter subject matter. Have you done any readings lately?

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 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
    No I'm always writing. This poem is dedicated to a friend who is struggling hard with depression and anxiety. I can only write about the raw and honest things happening in this world, in my life and from encounters around me. Always good to talk to you.