Tanka Collection
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka Poem - nice bright picture presentation - I see it so clearly in these colors - poem flows nicely, I like the rhyming words it pulls it together - oak tree disrobes shamelessly - nice use of metaphors-
you have certainly been a busy girl with all these poems!!! Be careful you don't break a nail girl! lol. Good Job. Take care
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka Poem - nice bright picture presentation - I see it so clearly in these colors - poem flows nicely, I like the rhyming words it pulls it together - oak tree disrobes shamelessly - nice use of metaphors-
you have certainly been a busy girl with all these poems!!! Be careful you don't break a nail girl! lol. Good Job. Take care
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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My goal has been to write 2 poems a day. Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You already know how I feel about beautiful autumn leaves. I so miss them. I asked by husband if we could take a vacation to the Midwest so I could see the leaves, that I missed them that much. He said I asked too late to make plans. I'll make plans earlier next year. Thank you for sharing your beautiful package with us.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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You already know how I feel about beautiful autumn leaves. I so miss them. I asked by husband if we could take a vacation to the Midwest so I could see the leaves, that I missed them that much. He said I asked too late to make plans. I'll make plans earlier next year. Thank you for sharing your beautiful package with us.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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oh, I wish you could go midwest too. Thank you, Barbara. I always appreciate your heartfelt reviews. Hugs.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from karenina
There is an ethereal beauty to autumn and you've captured it perfectly here, Gypsy!
"as oak tree disproves shamelessly..."
Pristine! Love the metaphor!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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There is an ethereal beauty to autumn and you've captured it perfectly here, Gypsy!
"as oak tree disproves shamelessly..."
Pristine! Love the metaphor!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you, sister karenina, I'm happy you liked the poem. Autumn is one of my two favorite seasons. I love the sight, smell, and feeling of cool breeze. I hope you are doing well.
Love,
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. A great job as always! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. A great job as always! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Teri, I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Ricky1024
This Tanka about an Oak tree at its finest.
Was written well, rich in theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this colorful Poem.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This Tanka about an Oak tree at its finest.
Was written well, rich in theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this colorful Poem.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ricky, I hope you are doing well.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
This exceptional poem epitomizes autumn, with its mention falling foliage. You make a dreary time of year (end of fall) into one of grace and dance.
Good luck with all your writing, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Gypsy,
This exceptional poem epitomizes autumn, with its mention falling foliage. You make a dreary time of year (end of fall) into one of grace and dance.
Good luck with all your writing, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Cindy, I hope you are doing well. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy Word Weaver
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You?re welcome, Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I think you've hit on a brand new type of pornography; tree porn. I'm willing to bet it's a lucrative market in waiting!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I think you've hit on a brand new type of pornography; tree porn. I'm willing to bet it's a lucrative market in waiting!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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LoL tree porn? Lol that gives 'tree huggers' a different meaning.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback
Gypsy Word Weaver
Comment from aryr
What a delightful picture, Gypsy! Your words showed a creative side as the oak tree disrobes majestically. This was so clever! I would have never thought of this. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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What a delightful picture, Gypsy! Your words showed a creative side as the oak tree disrobes majestically. This was so clever! I would have never thought of this. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Blessed be Aryr.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
I like your personification of the oak tree "disrobing shamelessly." Of course, the tree had no choice. But actually, sometimes, oak trees hold on to their leaves and they turn brown. Lovely presentation as always!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I like your personification of the oak tree "disrobing shamelessly." Of course, the tree had no choice. But actually, sometimes, oak trees hold on to their leaves and they turn brown. Lovely presentation as always!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you, big sister. It's fun to use personification of nature. After all, we are all living creatures.
Love you,
Marival.
