The Real Artwork
Rhyming Poem contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have given an excellent message here, and written it perfectly according to your own requirements. You are of course right. After all I have seldom seen coloured, or heaven forbid multi-coloured, fancy fonts in a real book. And pictures are generally for kids. Kate xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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You have given an excellent message here, and written it perfectly according to your own requirements. You are of course right. After all I have seldom seen coloured, or heaven forbid multi-coloured, fancy fonts in a real book. And pictures are generally for kids. Kate xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Lol. And imagine if those pictures moved as well. Boy, we'd be raising a world of aimless children, that's for sure. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Kate. I'm glad at least someone other than myself agrees.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Real Artwork, finds the goal of producing that which others will see and distinguish in their minds as different than the pulp they see daily.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This poem, The Real Artwork, finds the goal of producing that which others will see and distinguish in their minds as different than the pulp they see daily.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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And there's a lot of it out there. Lol. Thank you for the great review, Bill. I appreciate the generous stars, friend. Have a great night.
Comment from Celyn
I agree entirely with what this poem is saying here after all this is supposed to be a poetry sight. Pictures can illustrate a poem but the poem should be truly self-standing first.
The rhyming in this poem is excellent and so is the rhythm. I like the helmsman's wheel imagery and the last verse really says it all I think.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I agree entirely with what this poem is saying here after all this is supposed to be a poetry sight. Pictures can illustrate a poem but the poem should be truly self-standing first.
The rhyming in this poem is excellent and so is the rhythm. I like the helmsman's wheel imagery and the last verse really says it all I think.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Celyn. I've been on here for a few years and that just seems the norm, to have pictures with your writing. I don't quite understand it but that's how it's been ever since I've been here. I dearly appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.
