Holiday Rituals
A multi-generational gathering.6 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a delightful poem and I'm afraid, all to accurate for many families these days. I enjoyed the rhyme and imagery and all the colorful details. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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This is a delightful poem and I'm afraid, all to accurate for many families these days. I enjoyed the rhyme and imagery and all the colorful details. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2023
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thank you for the fabulous rating and the good wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a typical family gathering with the chaos of different generations and the lively buzz of people all with different needs, but what I felt here was warmth and happiness, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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This sounds like a typical family gathering with the chaos of different generations and the lively buzz of people all with different needs, but what I felt here was warmth and happiness, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from bob cullen
Loved the line; 'Granny getting antsy 'cause she's being ignored.' That is precisely what happened, after a few wines. Were you at our family gathering? This is superbly written. The rhyme is magical, and it flowed equally as well, and almost as often as Gran's wine. She sure slept well that night.
A fabulous poem.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Loved the line; 'Granny getting antsy 'cause she's being ignored.' That is precisely what happened, after a few wines. Were you at our family gathering? This is superbly written. The rhyme is magical, and it flowed equally as well, and almost as often as Gran's wine. She sure slept well that night.
A fabulous poem.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Yes, yes I was at your gathering! LOL Thanks for the fabulous review and the 6 stars. Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
A fascinating poem my friend, and although the flow is a little antsy in places, very clever story and ideal for this type of rhyming poem that this, articulate, with great rhyming, and very quirky, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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A fascinating poem my friend, and although the flow is a little antsy in places, very clever story and ideal for this type of rhyming poem that this, articulate, with great rhyming, and very quirky, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you kindly!
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A leasure
Comment from zanya
A lovely humorous touch here in these lines celebrating all that is Thanksgiving or indeed any family gathering with a wonderful mingling of generations
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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A lovely humorous touch here in these lines celebrating all that is Thanksgiving or indeed any family gathering with a wonderful mingling of generations
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind words!
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This poem conveyed the poet's message with great humor, effective use of rhyming and imagery. Your choice of graphic also worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Well done. This poem conveyed the poet's message with great humor, effective use of rhyming and imagery. Your choice of graphic also worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thanks! Dare I say, Happy Thanksgiving!
