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For My Dad

I believe in Myself

3 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great tribute to your dad and to you
in the way you progressed with believing in
yourself, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it.
Your lines flowed smoothly with great details.
Great job with the requirements of the prompt.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from CATHERINE ROCHESTER
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Love the sentiment in your work. Dependency on parents is a little predictable, though not everyone is able to be dependent on a parent. You are fortunate to have such a great dad.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Nice response to the writing prompt. A great illustration of the power of a father to guide and son toward self-confidence, self-sufficiency, and independence. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!