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My loss of my only son Jason.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Zue65
This is such a sad and poignant piece. When you talk about your son and your wife, your poetry weeps with tragic tears too. I like the choice of your words and the flow of the lines. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2022
Thanks nassus.
Journaling helps tremendously with grief.
Have a blessed Thanksgiving.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from
royowen
What can I say Ricky, my sister lost her 18 month old child to a malfunctioning liver, he died in her arms, but she is still grieving, the pain isn't as great now, but she moved on, and that's all we can do my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
Thanks Roy and send her my condolences.
And tell her it gets better with time.
And, never to forget.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by royowen on 22-Nov-2022
She knows that, it happened a long time ago.
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