Just Another Day
Daily Life in the USA24 total reviews
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Congratulations on the win. Well deserved. It certainly is fitting with what is happening with gun control and what is not happening towards the control of the issue on this subject. Look at the shooting in Virginia by a six year old. Too many points to ignore here. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Congratulations on the win. Well deserved. It certainly is fitting with what is happening with gun control and what is not happening towards the control of the issue on this subject. Look at the shooting in Virginia by a six year old. Too many points to ignore here. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
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Thank you for your review. Something needs to be done beyond thoughts and prayers.
Comment from AP Apgar
Excellent Poem- definitely an accurate assessment of the state of our nation! I fear that cancel culture could easily escalate to mean something even more destructive to citizens- very well written -
AP
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Excellent Poem- definitely an accurate assessment of the state of our nation! I fear that cancel culture could easily escalate to mean something even more destructive to citizens- very well written -
AP
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thank you, AP for the review! It's getting uglier by the day.
Comment from lyenochka
Great social commentary and the constant mass shootings still won't make Congress take action because they are bribed by the NRA which in turn is heavily supported by Russia. Russian operatives are known to go to NRA conventions. Well said and congratulations on the win!
Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Great social commentary and the constant mass shootings still won't make Congress take action because they are bribed by the NRA which in turn is heavily supported by Russia. Russian operatives are known to go to NRA conventions. Well said and congratulations on the win!
Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the comments, review rating and of course the B-day wishes!
Comment from Jim Wile
Visually beautiful with the red-white-and-blue motif. Very striking. Such an important observation you've made in this short Senru. Very well done, Sandra.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Visually beautiful with the red-white-and-blue motif. Very striking. Such an important observation you've made in this short Senru. Very well done, Sandra.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jim, for stopping by and reviewing one of my poems. Feel comfortable reading more if you like. Your time and review are appreciated.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on you win. You certainly deserve it for these powerful and truthful words with ever mass killing, prayers offered but no acton to reduce gun violence.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Congratulations on you win. You certainly deserve it for these powerful and truthful words with ever mass killing, prayers offered but no acton to reduce gun violence.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the review rating and congrats!
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words strong and powerful. The first two lines
flow and connect well. The last line says it all! This poem, for me,
clearly states the ways things are! It is heartfelt and sad. The artwork
is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Happy Thanksgiving!.....Maria
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I found the author's words strong and powerful. The first two lines
flow and connect well. The last line says it all! This poem, for me,
clearly states the ways things are! It is heartfelt and sad. The artwork
is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Happy Thanksgiving!.....Maria
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Maria,
Thank you for your supportive comments and review rating.
Blessings to you and yours this Thanksgiving!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very well done. Could not agree more. Everytime I hear a member of congresss offer useless thoughts and prayers I think of a phrase from one of my own poems
"Politicians offer
useless thoughts and prayers
the gun ghosts don't care
they are dead."
I have written lots of gun poems some on my blog. I'd love to feature this little poem as well in my next update. check it out Https://theworldaccordingtocosmos.com
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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very well done. Could not agree more. Everytime I hear a member of congresss offer useless thoughts and prayers I think of a phrase from one of my own poems
"Politicians offer
useless thoughts and prayers
the gun ghosts don't care
they are dead."
I have written lots of gun poems some on my blog. I'd love to feature this little poem as well in my next update. check it out Https://theworldaccordingtocosmos.com
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the review, and I will check out your website.
Comment from susand3022
You certainly hit the nail on the head with this one, Author.
Someone, a fellow Fanstorian, put in their notes yesterday under a poem, that the Bible essentially says that a club isn't responsible for what a person does with it, so why punish the club? Mind you this person doesn't live in the United States.
It did explain the entire Republican point of view though. "Guns don't kill people, people kill people!" So let them have their AK-47s I guess. I figure that when a disgruntled 15-year-old to a session of congress with his AK-47, then something MIGHT finally get done.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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You certainly hit the nail on the head with this one, Author.
Someone, a fellow Fanstorian, put in their notes yesterday under a poem, that the Bible essentially says that a club isn't responsible for what a person does with it, so why punish the club? Mind you this person doesn't live in the United States.
It did explain the entire Republican point of view though. "Guns don't kill people, people kill people!" So let them have their AK-47s I guess. I figure that when a disgruntled 15-year-old to a session of congress with his AK-47, then something MIGHT finally get done.
Susan :)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I guess that will depend on which Congressperson is killed. We are such a divided crazy nation. It's scary that nowhere is sacred or safe. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Just Another Day, has the proper formatting and notes that mass killings in America have become a an SSDD across the nation.
same shit, different day
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This senryu, Just Another Day, has the proper formatting and notes that mass killings in America have become a an SSDD across the nation.
same shit, different day
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I feel the same. SSDD and hope we are spared. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Senryu writing prompt contest.
I like your presentation. These days is hard to pass any laws.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Weaver.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Word
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Excellent entry for the Senryu writing prompt contest.
I like your presentation. These days is hard to pass any laws.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Weaver.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Word
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ms. Gypsy. I appreciate you and the review.
