Comment from Brian Craycroft

Average

well praise god. there is no act more noble than honoring the lord.

as far as the poem, the sincerety is good. the typos need fixing, i think there are at least 4: "Ifts" "gor""noe" "shoe". they reduce the impact of the message.

also, I would fix the pronoun references to Jesus and make the grammatically correct, for example: "Lets look upon He with respect and Grace" should be "Lets look upon Him with respect and Grace"

otherwise nice work. amen brother(or sister)

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022

Why thanks a lot for stopping by and pointing out the gramical errors that I unfortunately forgot to edit.
Now normally I do go back over my work but something must have been happening but that's quite okay.
It's corrected now and you have a blessed day bro.
Doctor Ricky1024

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Because God gives to us with generosity and zealous giving, we should do the same, He emptied Himself when He stepped out of Heaven, born in a stable, a food receptacle for His, with poor parents, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022

Thanks Roy for your review and comments.
Doctor Ricky1024

reply by royowen on 21-Nov-2022

Welcome

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022