Quiet Lawyer
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Comment from John Ciarmello
Another great chapter, Barbara! Alan's scheme to wiggle his way into the firm was diabolic. I can see where Ali is kicking herself. Happy Thanks ]giving to you as well, and stay safe. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Another great chapter, Barbara! Alan's scheme to wiggle his way into the firm was diabolic. I can see where Ali is kicking herself. Happy Thanks ]giving to you as well, and stay safe. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. Alan will get worse in Sunday's post. Happy Thanksgiving.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the contemplative side of Ali and how thoughtful Cordero is about how to approach her and listen and give his supportive feedback. I hope that Alan won't be able to stay with the company!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I like the contemplative side of Ali and how thoughtful Cordero is about how to approach her and listen and give his supportive feedback. I hope that Alan won't be able to stay with the company!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Alan will get worse in Sunday's post. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Excellent storyline. I wish I had started reading from the first chapter. You have really peaked my interest. Strong characters, I need to go back and read from beginning.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Excellent storyline. I wish I had started reading from the first chapter. You have really peaked my interest. Strong characters, I need to go back and read from beginning.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you for dropping by. I hope I see your review again.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Barbara,
I enjoyed your well-written chapter. I feel for anyone who gets used like Ali was.
I would like to see Cordero and Ali together. Perhaps he is lying low until he can win her heart.
Very entertaining story.
Blessings,
Happy Thanksgiving.
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Barbara,
I enjoyed your well-written chapter. I feel for anyone who gets used like Ali was.
I would like to see Cordero and Ali together. Perhaps he is lying low until he can win her heart.
Very entertaining story.
Blessings,
Happy Thanksgiving.
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Ali has been hurt and afraid of another relationship. Thank you for the kind review.
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You?re welcome, Barbara.
Good luck with your great book.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from lancellot
Well, that answers some lingering questions as to why Alan wanted a woman like Alexandra. It didn't make sense before but we all can understand the desire for more money. (naturally it raises more questions, but I'm sure you know what those are.) Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Well, that answers some lingering questions as to why Alan wanted a woman like Alexandra. It didn't make sense before but we all can understand the desire for more money. (naturally it raises more questions, but I'm sure you know what those are.) Well done.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Alan will show up again in Sunday's post. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I couldn't believe I was done reading the chapter so quickly, lol!
Only the second chapter I've read and I've come late to the party, but I like Ali already. Sounds like romance is in the air with Cordero (someone to bounce all this off of whom she can trust!), and an ally in Joseph.
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving week:-)
Pam
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I couldn't believe I was done reading the chapter so quickly, lol!
Only the second chapter I've read and I've come late to the party, but I like Ali already. Sounds like romance is in the air with Cordero (someone to bounce all this off of whom she can trust!), and an ally in Joseph.
Have a wonderful Thanksgiving week:-)
Pam
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad you're enjoying.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an absolute prat that man is!! I'm glad Ali sat in on the conversation, Alan just doesn't know when to stop, does he? Now what will he do? I'm sure he's not going to stop pestering Ali until he gets his own way. But that won't happen! Short but sweet chapter, Barbara! Well done. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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What an absolute prat that man is!! I'm glad Ali sat in on the conversation, Alan just doesn't know when to stop, does he? Now what will he do? I'm sure he's not going to stop pestering Ali until he gets his own way. But that won't happen! Short but sweet chapter, Barbara! Well done. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. We will see Alan at his finest on Sunday.
Comment from Sanku
yes .this post was much shorter than your usual posts. But it throws a lot of light on many things. Ali and Cord trust each other completely now .I like that there is no hurry in the development of the romance.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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yes .this post was much shorter than your usual posts. But it throws a lot of light on many things. Ali and Cord trust each other completely now .I like that there is no hurry in the development of the romance.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I don't like to hurry romance. Ali will discover to what lengths Alan will go to. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I don't think Alan is going to take what Ali handed him without retribution. Hopefully he won't get together with Pat. This is a great suspense story, and you haven't had to kill anyone.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I don't think Alan is going to take what Ali handed him without retribution. Hopefully he won't get together with Pat. This is a great suspense story, and you haven't had to kill anyone.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind review. We'll see Alan on Sunday. LOL
Comment from BethShelby
I'm a little surprised that Ali was upset about Alan since she doesn't care for him anyway. However, even if you wanted someone like that out of your life, it would hurt to know someone you thought cared about you, and then found out you were only being used I'm enjoying the story.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I'm a little surprised that Ali was upset about Alan since she doesn't care for him anyway. However, even if you wanted someone like that out of your life, it would hurt to know someone you thought cared about you, and then found out you were only being used I'm enjoying the story.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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When she found out he only wanted to marry her to be a partner, she was angry with herself for being so stupid. Thank you for the kind review.
