Silly Billy Goat
Are you kidding?14 total reviews
Comment from karenina
LOL. All I could think is if animals have orthodontists, I can't even imagine what the cost would be! I had braces on both of my children, and it nearly bankrupted me! What a photo! (Will he/she need a retainer?)
Nice smile!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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LOL. All I could think is if animals have orthodontists, I can't even imagine what the cost would be! I had braces on both of my children, and it nearly bankrupted me! What a photo! (Will he/she need a retainer?)
Nice smile!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
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Lol! My eldest three grandchildren either have or will have orthodontic work. The other four probably not. Animals? Gracious me. Tomorrow, Sunny is going to the veterinarian to have his teeth cleaned and a loose tooth removed - under general anaesthetic. AU$815! Yikes.
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Egads. I know...but these fur babies are family...and my gosh! (My daughter recently spent a small fortune on teeth scaling for her Handsome dog, Finnegan.
Comment from Bill Schott
This witty animal 5'7'5, Silly Billy Goat, has the proper formatting and shows the critter with the GREATEST OF ALL TIME grin....................................
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This witty animal 5'7'5, Silly Billy Goat, has the proper formatting and shows the critter with the GREATEST OF ALL TIME grin....................................
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thanks Bill. A fun comment, and true. Who can resist such an engaging smile?
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. The message is clear. Yes, I chuckled at the line about posting this visual on Facebook. The viual is great! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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This is a good 5-7-5 entry. The text is a great size. The message is clear. Yes, I chuckled at the line about posting this visual on Facebook. The viual is great! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Sandra. Glad it gave you a chuckle.
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You are welcome.
Comment from DragonSkulls
Hahaha. That picture is just too funny. At least this piece has some humor to it unlike many of the other entries and doesn't rely on old jokes to make us laugh. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Thanks for the chuckle.
=]
Ron
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Hahaha. That picture is just too funny. At least this piece has some humor to it unlike many of the other entries and doesn't rely on old jokes to make us laugh. I wish you the best of luck in the booth. Thanks for the chuckle.
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Ron
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thanks for reviewing. Looks like people prefer time-worn pieces?.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent satori with a delightful juxtaposition.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Witty animal 5-7-5 contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Excellent satori with a delightful juxtaposition.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy! Love your encouraging review.
Comment from bob cullen
I love this. It contains such wonderful irreverence. After reading this my smile and my teeth were almost as radiant as the one being photographed. He really does qualify as the G.O.A.T. The greatest of all time.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I love this. It contains such wonderful irreverence. After reading this my smile and my teeth were almost as radiant as the one being photographed. He really does qualify as the G.O.A.T. The greatest of all time.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Lol. What a super and fun review! Many thanks.
Comment from Dawn Munro
AaaaaaaaHahaha! This is adorable, and that picture is a charmer, especially when paired with your title. The syllable count is bang-on. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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AaaaaaaaHahaha! This is adorable, and that picture is a charmer, especially when paired with your title. The syllable count is bang-on. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for your good wishes and super review!
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You are very welcome. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, the photograph and words are amusing and you hit the spot for me, humour for the contest and you had me smiling, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Ha ha ha, the photograph and words are amusing and you hit the spot for me, humour for the contest and you had me smiling, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thanks very much for reviewing.
Comment from Celyn
This is an amusing poem that fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem. However, without the picture you would not know that it was about an animal. Poems should really be able to stand on their own if possible so I would try to make it a bit more obviously about a goat if I could.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This is an amusing poem that fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem. However, without the picture you would not know that it was about an animal. Poems should really be able to stand on their own if possible so I would try to make it a bit more obviously about a goat if I could.
Good luck with it.
Celyn
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from royowen
What a precious 5/7/5. You have done a perfect job on this, hilarious in content and thoughtful in its content, the way things are going this is the modern trend, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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What a precious 5/7/5. You have done a perfect job on this, hilarious in content and thoughtful in its content, the way things are going this is the modern trend, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your fun review and good wishes.
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Welcome