Sending flowers
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Comment from royowen
Yes, indeed, dreams can be prophetic, if Joseph and Daniel are anything to go by, and I believe they are. There is a preacher here who claims to be a dream reader, but probably a little far from you. Well done Wendy, this is a wonderful post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Yes, indeed, dreams can be prophetic, if Joseph and Daniel are anything to go by, and I believe they are. There is a preacher here who claims to be a dream reader, but probably a little far from you. Well done Wendy, this is a wonderful post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thanks Roy. Great review. So far to this point, she has painful arthritis, nothing more, so I hope it?s not prophetic!
Wendy
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That?s painful
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I see you aced this contest too. Lucky, perhaps becauseI, the creator of this contest, wrote a piece and forgot however to release it. Go figure. Congratulatioons.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I see you aced this contest too. Lucky, perhaps becauseI, the creator of this contest, wrote a piece and forgot however to release it. Go figure. Congratulatioons.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Oh Tom, you must be so disappointed. Release it anyway and at least get some reviews. I thought there was one missing from the voting booth.
Wendy
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I have re-released it. Have not a clue why it was and then wasn't there. I mean, I think I saw it listed once upon a hourglass.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Wendy, congratulations on winning the contest. I can see why.
This is a good poem, and I hope your friend is doing some better. The text is a great size. The message of fear and concern for the physical pain your friend is experiencing is clearly presented.
Dreams are strange but bear often kernels of truth. The visual fits well.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Wendy, congratulations on winning the contest. I can see why.
This is a good poem, and I hope your friend is doing some better. The text is a great size. The message of fear and concern for the physical pain your friend is experiencing is clearly presented.
Dreams are strange but bear often kernels of truth. The visual fits well.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Sandra for your very positive and thoughtful review. Thanks too for the congratulations. I appreciate you.
Wendy
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This friend of yours is obviously very much on your mind as you dream of her and hope to be able to help her in her hour of need. We have modern medicine to prevent the pain and it can prolong death unfortunately, a poignant write, love Dollyx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This friend of yours is obviously very much on your mind as you dream of her and hope to be able to help her in her hour of need. We have modern medicine to prevent the pain and it can prolong death unfortunately, a poignant write, love Dollyx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly. Fortunately it was only a dream, and in fact she only has bad arthritis. But in my dream she was dying. Dreams can certainly twist reality.
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Your poem prompted me to write my latest post called Nachtmerrie (Nightmares), so I thank you for that x x x
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, dreams can twist the reality and obviously you were so worried for her and that colored your dreams. I hope she will be cheered by your flowers and that you both can rest in the gift of the days she has and the beautiful future to come with Him.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Yes, dreams can twist the reality and obviously you were so worried for her and that colored your dreams. I hope she will be cheered by your flowers and that you both can rest in the gift of the days she has and the beautiful future to come with Him.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this lovely review!
Comment from Zue65
I have stopped writing for more than four years and I am still trying to feel my way back here at this site. So, I am in awe to the writers who can pen poetry and create a scene in poetic lines that rhyme, like the author did. I enjoyed reading your poem. Keep sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I have stopped writing for more than four years and I am still trying to feel my way back here at this site. So, I am in awe to the writers who can pen poetry and create a scene in poetic lines that rhyme, like the author did. I enjoyed reading your poem. Keep sharing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for such an encouraging review. I appreciate it.
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
It's hard when you can't see a friend that you know is dealing with hardships. Dreams, fortunately, can be quite misleading, though they can hold a grain of truth to them!
I do hope she's okay.
Susan :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Hello Author,
It's hard when you can't see a friend that you know is dealing with hardships. Dreams, fortunately, can be quite misleading, though they can hold a grain of truth to them!
I do hope she's okay.
Susan :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review. (Yes, she?s pretty good apart from painful arthritis!)
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Wendy,
Your beautiful poem is very touching. Death is as natural as life for us, yet it is so sad to experience the death of a friend or loved one.
Your rhyme flows, and your words are a nice ode to this dear friend.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Wendy,
Your beautiful poem is very touching. Death is as natural as life for us, yet it is so sad to experience the death of a friend or loved one.
Your rhyme flows, and your words are a nice ode to this dear friend.
Good luck with this one!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you for a super review with such thoughtful and caring words and good wishes. All are appreciated.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very philosophical. It is true that death can be a relieving gift.
When people ask how old do you want to live to be, I always answer "Until I am no longer healthy."
Anyways, great poem with wonderfully well-placed and seemingly unforced rhymes.
I enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Very philosophical. It is true that death can be a relieving gift.
When people ask how old do you want to live to be, I always answer "Until I am no longer healthy."
Anyways, great poem with wonderfully well-placed and seemingly unforced rhymes.
I enjoyed this!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you. Great review. When they ask me, I say I want to go before everyone wishes I would go! Lol.
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Too funny!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Sending Flowers"
This is a contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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"Sending Flowers"
This is a contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Appreciated.
