My Christmas Bonus
Something special16 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
You now have two votes!
Found your story interesting . I was convinced that to be talented in this art , one had to have started writing already at a young age. You proved me wrong .. your poetry proved me wrong.
Your poetry is many things : colourful, sad, witty, meaningful , always engaging.
All those blank pages would have scared me ... good thing you felt they were ready for a good inking.
The only bonus I ever receive was a yearly panettone at Christmas from my ex boss.
I never told her I didn't like panettone.. I think she would faint to know I fed a couple of birds on my window sill .. they loved it ( biggrin) . Watching them eat was a delightful sight.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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You now have two votes!
Found your story interesting . I was convinced that to be talented in this art , one had to have started writing already at a young age. You proved me wrong .. your poetry proved me wrong.
Your poetry is many things : colourful, sad, witty, meaningful , always engaging.
All those blank pages would have scared me ... good thing you felt they were ready for a good inking.
The only bonus I ever receive was a yearly panettone at Christmas from my ex boss.
I never told her I didn't like panettone.. I think she would faint to know I fed a couple of birds on my window sill .. they loved it ( biggrin) . Watching them eat was a delightful sight.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2022
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Always fun to read your comments. They bring a smile.
Comment from Douglas Goff
We all have an story to tell concerning our writing journey and I found yours to be quite interesting.
If your pen ever runs dry I would get you another one in a heartbeat as you add much value to this site.
Your perceptions plus your story telling abilities plus your writing technique equals a six star rating all day long. Thank you for sharing my friend!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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We all have an story to tell concerning our writing journey and I found yours to be quite interesting.
If your pen ever runs dry I would get you another one in a heartbeat as you add much value to this site.
Your perceptions plus your story telling abilities plus your writing technique equals a six star rating all day long. Thank you for sharing my friend!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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That is very nice of you. Thank you very much.
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That is very nice of you. Thank you very much.
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that is lovely, and very much mirror the way I happened on Fanstory and into writing at all. I've always read a lot to which my walls speak volumes. Good luck. Ul look Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Aw, that is lovely, and very much mirror the way I happened on Fanstory and into writing at all. I've always read a lot to which my walls speak volumes. Good luck. Ul look Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Great to hear. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from Tpa
I marvel at the many directions of writing. You stay constant in every form of your work and instill encouragement in others. I wish you the best in the contest.
Here are some suggestions.
'look UP: the
word
'good inking is that such a word used? try WRITING
Bare with... is not necessary
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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I marvel at the many directions of writing. You stay constant in every form of your work and instill encouragement in others. I wish you the best in the contest.
Here are some suggestions.
'look UP: the
word
'good inking is that such a word used? try WRITING
Bare with... is not necessary
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Really, you're going to be subjective on this. Your review doesn't make sense. Can't thank you for nothing. 'inking' is a means to indicate that somethings is being penned. Have an imagination. Not flattered on this one. Sorry.
Comment from lyenochka
That's a wonderful story of how you started to write beginning with haiku poetry! And I hope you'll join Gypsy's clubs of various Japanese poetry to get more inspiration to write.
I'm so glad all your creativity was released through the gift/bonus of that blank book! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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That's a wonderful story of how you started to write beginning with haiku poetry! And I hope you'll join Gypsy's clubs of various Japanese poetry to get more inspiration to write.
I'm so glad all your creativity was released through the gift/bonus of that blank book! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
Although I wrote poems and songs before I ventured onto fanstory, I was quite hesitant for awhile, but I genuinely didn't know much about poetry atall, but kindly folk came alongside and helped. The beauty is I'm not afraid to tackle most forms now, so I can help others in the process. I've seen many fine writers come and go, unfortunately some have passed, but I learned from then, as we all will inevitably, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Although I wrote poems and songs before I ventured onto fanstory, I was quite hesitant for awhile, but I genuinely didn't know much about poetry atall, but kindly folk came alongside and helped. The beauty is I'm not afraid to tackle most forms now, so I can help others in the process. I've seen many fine writers come and go, unfortunately some have passed, but I learned from then, as we all will inevitably, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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We continue to explore the possibilities. Thanks.
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Keep going
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed the "we're old friends" conversational tone of your story. I watch published writers on Master Class and YouTube. They all recommend carrying a 'bonus' book with you wherever you go. You may have your greatest idea when you're away from your computer. I enjoyed your account of how you began writing and what you chose to write. This is a very inspirational post. Thank you, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed the "we're old friends" conversational tone of your story. I watch published writers on Master Class and YouTube. They all recommend carrying a 'bonus' book with you wherever you go. You may have your greatest idea when you're away from your computer. I enjoyed your account of how you began writing and what you chose to write. This is a very inspirational post. Thank you, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This is a very nice review. Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job expressing your thoughts and feelings
about when and how you began writing in your bonus book,
Kaiku. I enjoyed reading it. You gave readers great insight into
what you wrote and why and how. I liked the way you formatted
your entry, though I would make the font a size larger and bolder.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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You did a great job expressing your thoughts and feelings
about when and how you began writing in your bonus book,
Kaiku. I enjoyed reading it. You gave readers great insight into
what you wrote and why and how. I liked the way you formatted
your entry, though I would make the font a size larger and bolder.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Good suggestions. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Dr. Von
I like the reflective style you chose as the path to describe your unexpected bonus. I appreciate the wonder of your poetry portfolio and the shorts you have written. It seems that you are anointed to write. Good job answering the prompt. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I like the reflective style you chose as the path to describe your unexpected bonus. I appreciate the wonder of your poetry portfolio and the shorts you have written. It seems that you are anointed to write. Good job answering the prompt. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Always a joy to read your thoughts. Thank you.
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Always a joy to read. You are welcome.
Comment from Zue65
I admire the sincerity and honesty of the writer. He presented himself as he is with no grandiose description, just himself, a human being with both the good and the bad in terms of his journey as a writer. Now, Christmas bonus has acquired a new meaning and we, the readers will be encouraged to assign new meaning to the term according to our own specific experiences. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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I admire the sincerity and honesty of the writer. He presented himself as he is with no grandiose description, just himself, a human being with both the good and the bad in terms of his journey as a writer. Now, Christmas bonus has acquired a new meaning and we, the readers will be encouraged to assign new meaning to the term according to our own specific experiences. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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That's a very thoughtful review. It is very much appreciated. What I was hoping for.
