Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Summer Memories"poems, stories
7 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
You are a wonderful story of resilience aand the painstaking efforts of survival.
Sparkling in your writing: a healing message through strength of resiliency.
-How unique to present this almost like Doctors notes, part personal journal, part medical stat sheet in prosaic verse.
Glad you are on the mend and hope you can enjoy a winter hiatus from medical incident.
Thanks for sharing your story and positive outlook.
A pleasure to read and review your work.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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You are a wonderful story of resilience aand the painstaking efforts of survival.
Sparkling in your writing: a healing message through strength of resiliency.
-How unique to present this almost like Doctors notes, part personal journal, part medical stat sheet in prosaic verse.
Glad you are on the mend and hope you can enjoy a winter hiatus from medical incident.
Thanks for sharing your story and positive outlook.
A pleasure to read and review your work.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Dear Marienkiefer, thanks for your review and comments. Dove
Comment from Teri7
I hope Fall and Winter are much better for you my friend. I am sorry you had to go through so much. You used very good descriptive words telling your story of your summertime events that were not fun at all. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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I hope Fall and Winter are much better for you my friend. I am sorry you had to go through so much. You used very good descriptive words telling your story of your summertime events that were not fun at all. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Hi Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Love, God bless, Donna
Comment from Ricky1024
"Summer Memories"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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"Summer Memories"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Dear Ricky, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Mariah Mize
Oh my, what a series of unfortunate events!! Although starting off with a very interesting beginning! It sounds like your quite a worldly person, I love listening to stories of experiences all over the world.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Oh my, what a series of unfortunate events!! Although starting off with a very interesting beginning! It sounds like your quite a worldly person, I love listening to stories of experiences all over the world.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Dear Mariah, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, your simmer got off to a great start, Dove. The trip
to Cooperstown sounded awesome. I'm happy for you
that you were able to get treatment and are sharing your
story. You've been through a lot and are a strong lady.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Well, your simmer got off to a great start, Dove. The trip
to Cooperstown sounded awesome. I'm happy for you
that you were able to get treatment and are sharing your
story. You've been through a lot and are a strong lady.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Dear Jan, thankyou for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from country ranch writer
As my kids would say to you when you do I y you do it up good. Sounds like you really did it this time around a dI hope you recovered well through it all. Some vacation.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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As my kids would say to you when you do I y you do it up good. Sounds like you really did it this time around a dI hope you recovered well through it all. Some vacation.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Dear country ranch writer, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, you certainly suffered over the summer and I hope you are fully recovered now? Life has its ups and downs and our health is so important, take care of yourself, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Oh my goodness, you certainly suffered over the summer and I hope you are fully recovered now? Life has its ups and downs and our health is so important, take care of yourself, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Dear Dolly, thank you for your review and empathy, I am fully recovered - let's hopeit stays that way for a long time! You take care too, love, Donna x