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3rd Place Finish
2 total reviews
Comment from
Ricky1024
This is a Free Form Contest Writing Prompt entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
Looked more like a Gunfight Showdown instead of a Pizza party!
Well done with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
That was the intended path my friend. Thank you for your review!
Comment from
prettybluebirds
This is cute and creative writing. The word (loses) should be spelled (losses) Other than that, it is perfect, and I love the addition of the artwork. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
Thank you so much! I really appreciate having friends on here who have my back. You rock!!!
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