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Audentis Fortuna Iuvat

3rd Place Finish

2 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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This is a Free Form Contest Writing Prompt entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
Looked more like a Gunfight Showdown instead of a Pizza party!
Well done with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
    That was the intended path my friend. Thank you for your review!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent
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This is cute and creative writing. The word (loses) should be spelled (losses) Other than that, it is perfect, and I love the addition of the artwork. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much! I really appreciate having friends on here who have my back. You rock!!!