Seen in a Dream
A Courtroom Scene2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
An interesting quirk meant to tickle the funny bones.
I'm just wondering what happened to Ellie-Mae?
Always loved her innocence on The Beverly Hillbillys.
Country ribs would do too!
Good luck with the writing prompt entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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An interesting quirk meant to tickle the funny bones.
I'm just wondering what happened to Ellie-Mae?
Always loved her innocence on The Beverly Hillbillys.
Country ribs would do too!
Good luck with the writing prompt entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Needs a picture, me thinks. It was written for a contest but somehow, even though I thought it was entered, wasn't and therefore I sent it on by itself. Thanks for your time and comment.
Comment from humpwhistle
Tom, I love your irreverence and humor. But, if it were me, I'd be a little more selective with your thoughts, and wrangle your sentences to more easily digestible tidbits. Just my opinion.
Peace, Lee
"All arise"--I think 'All rise' is the traditional order. Makes sense.
Entering in--sounds a bit redundant to my ears.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Tom, I love your irreverence and humor. But, if it were me, I'd be a little more selective with your thoughts, and wrangle your sentences to more easily digestible tidbits. Just my opinion.
Peace, Lee
"All arise"--I think 'All rise' is the traditional order. Makes sense.
Entering in--sounds a bit redundant to my ears.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you. rise should have been and now is thanks to you.
This was meant for a contest I thought I entered but only found when the judges ruled it wasn't there. Guess I started the process but must not have hit that final release button.
