Stars
Stars light up the dark night sky7 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a beautiful astronomical Cinquain. Excellent visuals, imagery and artistic presentation. I like the energy of it.
Your galactic artwork is so well chosen for this poem.
I liked "twinkling, dazzling, sparkling." A very elegant entry, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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That is a beautiful astronomical Cinquain. Excellent visuals, imagery and artistic presentation. I like the energy of it.
Your galactic artwork is so well chosen for this poem.
I liked "twinkling, dazzling, sparkling." A very elegant entry, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from jaded831
Nothing like the magic of a star filled summer night, you grab the reader with your calm relaxing intro, then shake things up with your ending. Almost like a mini movie. Well done, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Nothing like the magic of a star filled summer night, you grab the reader with your calm relaxing intro, then shake things up with your ending. Almost like a mini movie. Well done, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt Contest. Yours is my favorite in the contest.
Good form and following the rules. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt Contest. Yours is my favorite in the contest.
Good form and following the rules. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from royowen
This is a beautifully written poem, but unfortunately it's not the correct one, the cinquain consists of 2/4/6/8/2 progressive lines, read the instructions for the contest, that will confirm the form. Good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem, but unfortunately it's not the correct one, the cinquain consists of 2/4/6/8/2 progressive lines, read the instructions for the contest, that will confirm the form. Good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Oh my I didn?t realize the type I wrote was in the examples I thought you could use it. Thank you for letting me know.
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I meant syllable count. My pleasure
Comment from Celyn
I presume that you are following a non-traditional format for this cinquain as, if not the word count is wrong. If you are using the noun, two adjectives, three -ing words, a phrase and another word for the noun approach, your poem is fine and very beautiful in its description of a falling star. Asteroid is not quite another word for a star but it is for a falling one so I thin that you will be OK there.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I presume that you are following a non-traditional format for this cinquain as, if not the word count is wrong. If you are using the noun, two adjectives, three -ing words, a phrase and another word for the noun approach, your poem is fine and very beautiful in its description of a falling star. Asteroid is not quite another word for a star but it is for a falling one so I thin that you will be OK there.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good cinquain contest entry. The text is an okay size. The message is clearly stated.
I would drop the first word down one space to balance the distance at the bottom and top of poem. There needs to be a space between the words dazzling and sparkling. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is a good cinquain contest entry. The text is an okay size. The message is clearly stated.
I would drop the first word down one space to balance the distance at the bottom and top of poem. There needs to be a space between the words dazzling and sparkling. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I love your photo and the font you used. It all goes together perfectly. I love the night sky and looking for shooting stars. Very well written, short and sweet. You did a good job.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I love your photo and the font you used. It all goes together perfectly. I love the night sky and looking for shooting stars. Very well written, short and sweet. You did a good job.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much