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Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "By Candlelight"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanks poem - Excellent picture presentation -poem flows well and gives a clear picture of the theme - truth prevails, poets do seem to find that tragedy is the most human condition, and seem to gravitate towards it with their words -bleeding melancholic notions about the "souls dark night"- good line! Good Job AP
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanks poem - Excellent picture presentation -poem flows well and gives a clear picture of the theme - truth prevails, poets do seem to find that tragedy is the most human condition, and seem to gravitate towards it with their words -bleeding melancholic notions about the "souls dark night"- good line! Good Job AP
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem, I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and it helps to talk out you troubles on paper....the trick is to immerse yourself in them while writing, but to wrench your mind back from that dark place
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and it helps to talk out you troubles on paper....the trick is to immerse yourself in them while writing, but to wrench your mind back from that dark place
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do feel poets pour themselves into their work much more than prose writers. Prose writers do offer a piece of themselves in all they write, but poets place themselves on a limb every time. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I do feel poets pour themselves into their work much more than prose writers. Prose writers do offer a piece of themselves in all they write, but poets place themselves on a limb every time. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Barbara, for your time and kind review. May you have a lovely day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Beautiful! I always learn something new when I read your writings and your notes below. Ooo I have some inside me, of the souls dark night. Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent.
Write On
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Beautiful! I always learn something new when I read your writings and your notes below. Ooo I have some inside me, of the souls dark night. Thank you for sharing your beautiful talent.
Write On
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback,
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
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So true so true
Comment from lyenochka
That's the comfort poets and writers have. They have the ability of "bleeding melancholic notions" onto pages of paper or words on a screen to find comfort in the "soul's dark night."
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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That's the comfort poets and writers have. They have the ability of "bleeding melancholic notions" onto pages of paper or words on a screen to find comfort in the "soul's dark night."
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Yes, I like poetry more than prose because I can create a mental picture and add emotion. That's why I love Japanese poetry.
Thank you, big sister. I love you. ❤️
Marival
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is often what poet's do as we identify grief and sorrow and others feel those words that touch their hearts; we derive some comfort when we are in the company of others who feel the same way, much enjoyed,
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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This is often what poet's do as we identify grief and sorrow and others feel those words that touch their hearts; we derive some comfort when we are in the company of others who feel the same way, much enjoyed,
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, I always appreciate your kind and generous reviews and feedback. Have a lovely night.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the soul
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is just a beautiful Tanka poem, Gypsy. I love the alliteration of -
poet pours grief over paper, in fact the whole verse gives me goosebumps.
Beautiful presentation,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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This is just a beautiful Tanka poem, Gypsy. I love the alliteration of -
poet pours grief over paper, in fact the whole verse gives me goosebumps.
Beautiful presentation,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Pearl, I always appreciate kind reviews and feedback, yours is extra fabulous. Thank you for the six stars review.. Have a lovely night.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the soul