Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Deep in Dew"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem - excellent picture presentation as always - the beginning line in the poem has a double meaning - my Mother would say it to me when I had screw up as a child - probably because we were from the south, then newly transplanted in California - I like your poem - paints a colorful picture - Good Job. AP
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka poem - excellent picture presentation as always - the beginning line in the poem has a double meaning - my Mother would say it to me when I had screw up as a child - probably because we were from the south, then newly transplanted in California - I like your poem - paints a colorful picture - Good Job. AP
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem, I'm happy you like it.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We actually attempted to plant a Sugar Maple in our front yard so we could have beautiful red leaves in the fall. We watered it and took very good care of it, but it's simply too hot in Texas and it died. Your poem reminded me of this tree. Thank you for presenting us with a beautiful poetic package.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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We actually attempted to plant a Sugar Maple in our front yard so we could have beautiful red leaves in the fall. We watered it and took very good care of it, but it's simply too hot in Texas and it died. Your poem reminded me of this tree. Thank you for presenting us with a beautiful poetic package.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Oh, no... I'm sorry your maple tree died. They are truly majestic. My grandson, Atticus, wants a tree but we live in a townhouse without a garden. Our climate in pasadena, Los Angeles, is pretty warm. Once in a while we get rain and cool days..I love them.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback,
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart
Comment from lyenochka
What a lovely word picture! I could see the changes from the dew-covered grass as the wind blows the colorful maple leaves. Enjoyed how you painted the words from yellow to gamboge to orange to red!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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What a lovely word picture! I could see the changes from the dew-covered grass as the wind blows the colorful maple leaves. Enjoyed how you painted the words from yellow to gamboge to orange to red!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I love to write about all the shades, specially the ones with melodic sound. I have a great time writing and graphic art.
Thank you, big sister, I love you. I hope you have a wonderful day. 💛
Marival ❤️
Comment from BOO ghost
Read the author foot notes. Another beauty for this collection. Beautiful image and words! The words blend together like a rainbow. Deep in dew is a nice alliteration. Wow! 66 tankas.
BOO is trying to keep up!
Another dandy
Count your doubloon!
BOO!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Read the author foot notes. Another beauty for this collection. Beautiful image and words! The words blend together like a rainbow. Deep in dew is a nice alliteration. Wow! 66 tankas.
BOO is trying to keep up!
Another dandy
Count your doubloon!
BOO!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Boo, I always appreciate your kind and generous reviews and feedback. Have a lovely night.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the soul
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I find the concept of a crisp breeze intriguing and invigorating. For the rest, it is an astonishing image that you have described beautifully. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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I find the concept of a crisp breeze intriguing and invigorating. For the rest, it is an astonishing image that you have described beautifully. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Kate, I always appreciate your kind and generous reviews and feedback. Have a lovely night.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the soul