Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Verna,
Excellent poem and metaphor about truth. In one way or another, in our world truth is victorious.
Nice photo.
Great lune poem
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022

thank you so much, Cindy for an excellent review I appreciate it.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 19-Nov-2022

You?re welcome, Verna.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Nice Lune poem. A tall deeply rooted tree is a good metaphor for truth. It reminds me of the scripture about "a tree planted by the rivers of water." Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thank you very much, Beth, for you excellent review and your good wishes for the contest.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Nice Lune poem. A tall deeply rooted tree is a good metaphor for truth. It reminds me of the scripture about "a tree planted by the rivers of water." Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thank you, Beth, for the excellent review and the good wishes for the contest.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Absolutely true, for both truth and trees, and I like the layers of meaning. Great image, and an excellent Lune. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thanks, Wendy for an excellent review.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a beautifully stated lune poem. The message reads like a quote. However, the text needs to be larger. The text is dwarfed by the large visual. Enlarging the text will make it more prominent. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thanks, Sandra, for your thoughtful review and your kind wishes for the contest.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 17-Nov-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

I love the way you compared truth to a tree in this writing. It does make sense if one stops and thinks about it. The artwork is perfect for the subject of your poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022

Thank you very much for your excellent review and your kind wishes for the contest.

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

Love this short poem for the lune contest. Also, loved the tall tree metaphor for truth. Deep roots hold firm in storms. Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Hope all is well and have a great holiday.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you, Theodore. And a blessed Thanksgiving to you! Verna

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Very well stated in lune poetry form for the contest. A wonderful life lesson within too. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest, Verna dear.
Sally XOs

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you, Sally-And hugs right back!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Amen! And all of us need to be like that tree firmly grounded in the Lord so that we can weather those storms of life. Beautifully written, Verna! Best wishes in the contest!!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thanks, Helen