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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
He should have been charged with tormenting young boys in the hall. How could he get by with this kind of beating? Was every boy there without a parent? Was everyone an orphan?
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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He should have been charged with tormenting young boys in the hall. How could he get by with this kind of beating? Was every boy there without a parent? Was everyone an orphan?
Comment Written 20-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2022
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Yes all orphans. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Ricky1024
I do believe I remember reviewing a piece about Kind Tubbo.
Very colourful character.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I do believe I remember reviewing a piece about Kind Tubbo.
Very colourful character.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a well-written and very realistic chapter in the boy's life. Turbo, like so many loveless and self-centered characters, is capable of great brutality when opposed. The boy should have kept his mouth shut, but that isn't always possible. One thing you might want to fix: . . . distinctly (hear) every sound . . .
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a well-written and very realistic chapter in the boy's life. Turbo, like so many loveless and self-centered characters, is capable of great brutality when opposed. The boy should have kept his mouth shut, but that isn't always possible. One thing you might want to fix: . . . distinctly (hear) every sound . . .
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a well-written and very realistic chapter in the boy's life. Turbo, like so many loveless and self-centered characters, is capable of great brutality when opposed. The boy should have kept his mouth shut, but that isn't always possible. One thing you might want to fix: . . . distinctly (hear) every sound . . .
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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This is a well-written and very realistic chapter in the boy's life. Turbo, like so many loveless and self-centered characters, is capable of great brutality when opposed. The boy should have kept his mouth shut, but that isn't always possible. One thing you might want to fix: . . . distinctly (hear) every sound . . .
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the nit catch! Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A fast-moving chapter. The flow is good. The dialogue is believable. The language fits the situation. The images are clear. The narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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A fast-moving chapter. The flow is good. The dialogue is believable. The language fits the situation. The images are clear. The narrative stays on point.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Appreciate the comments and the review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, we never know what anyone might have had to go through to get to where they are in life, so we just have to respect and care about everyone. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Yes, we never know what anyone might have had to go through to get to where they are in life, so we just have to respect and care about everyone. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Always appreciate your comments and reviews.
Hope your Thanksgiving was a good one.
Been dealing with a health issue, but it seems better now.
Comment from Shirley McLain
That man was evil and disgusting, and it would have mattered what you said or did. I hope someone comes in and saves you. You did a great job. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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That man was evil and disgusting, and it would have mattered what you said or did. I hope someone comes in and saves you. You did a great job. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Shirley
Comment Written 24-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Hope you had a good Thanksgiving as well. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
I can see why the powers that be introduced a ban on corporal punishment, it is obviously a most affective way, and a swift deterrent, but cruelty and perverse, gratuitous violence is not, I found it affective on my own children, although a rarity and it's a very useful tool, but a terrible master, a moot problem. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I can see why the powers that be introduced a ban on corporal punishment, it is obviously a most affective way, and a swift deterrent, but cruelty and perverse, gratuitous violence is not, I found it affective on my own children, although a rarity and it's a very useful tool, but a terrible master, a moot problem. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Zue65
The author has unique way of assigning descriptive words to his characters especially the villain in this story. The evil is made more evil by his uncanny way of ascribing physical attributes that are way above normal. Your main character is also unusual, not the all-goody-goody boy toy but just a raw kid fighting for a place in the sun. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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The author has unique way of assigning descriptive words to his characters especially the villain in this story. The evil is made more evil by his uncanny way of ascribing physical attributes that are way above normal. Your main character is also unusual, not the all-goody-goody boy toy but just a raw kid fighting for a place in the sun. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Brett, how could anyone be so cruel to a child. It shows the man's sense of inferiority. It's despicable and quite nauseating that the only way to boost his ego is to abuse a child by brutal force.
I have to read on. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Wow, Brett, how could anyone be so cruel to a child. It shows the man's sense of inferiority. It's despicable and quite nauseating that the only way to boost his ego is to abuse a child by brutal force.
I have to read on. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Appreciate your insights and the review.
