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Cinquain Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt Contest. I like the reflection metaphor.
Good form and following the rules. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Wonderful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt Contest. I like the reflection metaphor.
Good form and following the rules. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good cinquain contest entry. The text is great. The message is clearly stated. The speaker acknowledges what most have in private moment-self-doubt.
I would drop the first word down one space to balance the distance at the bottom and top of poem. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a good cinquain contest entry. The text is great. The message is clearly stated. The speaker acknowledges what most have in private moment-self-doubt.
I would drop the first word down one space to balance the distance at the bottom and top of poem. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is skillfully executed and a delight to read. The artwork compliments the subject of your writing. I enjoyed reading your work. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
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Your poem is skillfully executed and a delight to read. The artwork compliments the subject of your writing. I enjoyed reading your work. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written cinquain with a good topic.
-Good description about looking in the mirror,
and seeing "more than is shown."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-A good entry; good luck.
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written cinquain with a good topic.
-Good description about looking in the mirror,
and seeing "more than is shown."
-Good concluding lines, as well.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
I love this. So deep and so well written. Great picture that you chose. Perfect.I really enjoy the truth you revealed that so many of us hold.
Good Luck
Thank you for sharing.
Write On
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I love this. So deep and so well written. Great picture that you chose. Perfect.I really enjoy the truth you revealed that so many of us hold.
Good Luck
Thank you for sharing.
Write On
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
Comment from Celyn
This poem beautifully reflects the feelings of so many people these days. It is amazing that you could get so much anguish into such a short poem - well done. The poem fulfills the requirements of a cinquain and the only thing that I would change is your use of capital letters, ie why one on the first, third, fourth and fifth lines but not the second?
Good luck with it
Celyn
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This poem beautifully reflects the feelings of so many people these days. It is amazing that you could get so much anguish into such a short poem - well done. The poem fulfills the requirements of a cinquain and the only thing that I would change is your use of capital letters, ie why one on the first, third, fourth and fifth lines but not the second?
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
Comment from royowen
One thing about age is one should have worked out both their limitations and their abilities, but on second thoughts, one should never limit oneself. But then what we think we are, we will become, beautifully written blessings, Roy
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One thing about age is one should have worked out both their limitations and their abilities, but on second thoughts, one should never limit oneself. But then what we think we are, we will become, beautifully written blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022