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A Fathers Grieving Heartache.

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My loss of my only son Jason.

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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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You labelled this Horror and Thriller, yet at the end it seemed you had found some peace. Perhaps comining to terms with terrible loss is the true horror, as though you have finally lost your loved ones? Kate xx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
    Now you're recognizing my style Kate.
    Great!
    Now continue to learn more!
    Yes, and thanks for your review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from Wendy G
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What a very moving poem. You have been to hell and back, but thankfully you know the Father's forgiveness, and are experiencing the freedom and joy that brings. Blessings on your life and for your writings.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    Thanks Wendy.
    This was one of my better approaches here on the site
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from royowen
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If we confess our sins, He will and cleanse us from all u righteousness.I know that sometimes we won't feel as though God hasn't forgiven us, but faith doesn't depend on feelings which can be the antithesis of what's really going on, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    Much appreciated on this lengthy piece about both forms of forgiving oneself.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by royowen on 18-Nov-2022
    Most welcome
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
Comment from Zue65
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Thanks for sharing a story about celebrating the glory of God and His bountiful mercy. God's forgiving nature cannot be measured and is available for everyone who believes in Him. Thanks a lot for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    So glad this one touched you and thanks.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Oh my friend you have been on a rough ride haven't you.

Lean on God as he has huge shoulders. Look up the incredible tragedy behind the song "It Is Well With My Soul".

Keep writing. It has wonderful therapeutic powers. Stay in the fight.

God isn't finished with you. I know he has used your works to help me stumble though some issues here recently.

Thank you brother.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    Thanks for sharing your time and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Kaiku
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I had just read a poem titled 'Hope'. After reading your work today, I find that there appears to be that ray of hope within you. It is sad to read your history and I wish you happiness in your future.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts and review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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You provide a lot of information in this piece.

Just remember, there is always One who forgives even when all seems completely worthless and lost.

Never take your eyes off that prize.

Nothing is more valuable.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
    True Brett.
    And, we both been in tough situations.
    Faith always helps.
    Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Sanku
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the twin tragedies of your life has made a very deep chasm in your soul.The grief can be crippling .But you were great to do organ donation.Your son is living still..

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
    Yes, my Son is not only still living but also helping me with my work.
    Doctor Ricky 1024