knowledge is a impact power
power is a impact power5 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
This is a unique writing approach. I like that your wordplay sinks the message in the reader's brain. I suspect this is the goal. Well-done. I applaud your writing gift.
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This is a unique writing approach. I like that your wordplay sinks the message in the reader's brain. I suspect this is the goal. Well-done. I applaud your writing gift.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your writing is something different, I will say that for sure. However, I find it unique and enjoy reading it. It kind of draws the reader along with the way it is phrased. Nice work.
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Your writing is something different, I will say that for sure. However, I find it unique and enjoy reading it. It kind of draws the reader along with the way it is phrased. Nice work.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
This was interesting in you Adjective word choices.
It did read well and flowed well with only one Grammar Issue.
Also, rich in Theme and Imagery.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This was interesting in you Adjective word choices.
It did read well and flowed well with only one Grammar Issue.
Also, rich in Theme and Imagery.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from royowen
Of course it would be impossible to be wise without knowledge, yet the other way around is possible, however if one is not wise about administering knowledge without wisdom it becomes just knowledge, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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Of course it would be impossible to be wise without knowledge, yet the other way around is possible, however if one is not wise about administering knowledge without wisdom it becomes just knowledge, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The repetition here has a mesmerising effect, creating a mantra-like feel. The reader could imagine the poem being effectively chanted aloud. However, when analysed closely, the meaning becomes unclear.
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The repetition here has a mesmerising effect, creating a mantra-like feel. The reader could imagine the poem being effectively chanted aloud. However, when analysed closely, the meaning becomes unclear.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
