Accomplish
Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this acrostic poem. It was very motivational. My favorite line was: Count on your dreams being achievable.
This seems like it would be a great thing for young people to read. Thanks for posting, and good luck in that contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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I liked reading this acrostic poem. It was very motivational. My favorite line was: Count on your dreams being achievable.
This seems like it would be a great thing for young people to read. Thanks for posting, and good luck in that contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your encouragement and the review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was well done, Mystery Author.
I like the first letter of each line in the different
color from the rest of the line. Your art choice was
supportive. You gave readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Your contest entry was well done, Mystery Author.
I like the first letter of each line in the different
color from the rest of the line. Your art choice was
supportive. You gave readers much to think about.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is skillfully executed and a joy to read. I love the artwork you added. It adds much to the meaning of the writing. I enjoyed reading this. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Your poem is skillfully executed and a joy to read. I love the artwork you added. It adds much to the meaning of the writing. I enjoyed reading this. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review and the good luck! Hopefully I win.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A good topic for your acrostic.
-I like the formatting and font choices.
-You make some good points,
beginning with "Anything is possible."
-A good question in line three.
-The one about teachers, I would suggest
that you actually want them to be visible.
I taught high school for 29 years, and
participation always counted in the grade.
It also shows your growth as a student
when you participate and think about
what is going on around you.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-A good topic for your acrostic.
-I like the formatting and font choices.
-You make some good points,
beginning with "Anything is possible."
-A good question in line three.
-The one about teachers, I would suggest
that you actually want them to be visible.
I taught high school for 29 years, and
participation always counted in the grade.
It also shows your growth as a student
when you participate and think about
what is going on around you.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like faith that one's ambitions will be fulfilled in the long run, and spurs the effort on the way to that goal. A beautifully written, rhyming acrostic, using difficult words in the process, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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There's nothing like faith that one's ambitions will be fulfilled in the long run, and spurs the effort on the way to that goal. A beautifully written, rhyming acrostic, using difficult words in the process, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
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Well done
Comment from Celyn
I like this poem and the acrostic part of it s good but I think this contest requires you to rhyme every other line, ie abab etc Your rhyming scheme seems to be aababaabab instead. Perhaps you can swap some words around before the cut-off time.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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I like this poem and the acrostic part of it s good but I think this contest requires you to rhyme every other line, ie abab etc Your rhyming scheme seems to be aababaabab instead. Perhaps you can swap some words around before the cut-off time.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This rhyming acrostic poem, ACCOMPLISH, has the vertical, first-letter formatting theme and reminds the readers that personal progress continues on into eternity.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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This rhyming acrostic poem, ACCOMPLISH, has the vertical, first-letter formatting theme and reminds the readers that personal progress continues on into eternity.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
