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a lune16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Although I don't know who "you" is, this is a great lune poem Bill, you've covered all the necessary requirements for this versatile but set syllable form to write a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Although I don't know who "you" is, this is a great lune poem Bill, you've covered all the necessary requirements for this versatile but set syllable form to write a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Celyn
I can't say that I exactly understand this poem but it reads well and fulfills the requirements of a lune poem so well done. I presume it means something like life is bizarre until you appear and then everything changes. Whatever it means, I like it so good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I can't say that I exactly understand this poem but it reads well and fulfills the requirements of a lune poem so well done. I presume it means something like life is bizarre until you appear and then everything changes. Whatever it means, I like it so good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Celyn
Comment from BethShelby
This is an interesting poem. The art work is certainly bizarre. There are a lot of people out there who also fit into what seems bizarre to us. Those who fit that catagory create become a new experience for those who seek to understand them.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is an interesting poem. The art work is certainly bizarre. There are a lot of people out there who also fit into what seems bizarre to us. Those who fit that catagory create become a new experience for those who seek to understand them.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks,Beth
Comment from Regina Elliott
Absolutely fab, Bill. The
artwork meshes so well
with the lune itself. I can
really identify with this poem
as my late husband would kid
me about being bizarre, lol!
My best wishes for the contest. All the best!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Absolutely fab, Bill. The
artwork meshes so well
with the lune itself. I can
really identify with this poem
as my late husband would kid
me about being bizarre, lol!
My best wishes for the contest. All the best!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Regina.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Being renewed by someone who brightens our day is magical and you brought some colour into your presentation Bill. A familiar face can make everything appear normal again, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Being renewed by someone who brightens our day is magical and you brought some colour into your presentation Bill. A familiar face can make everything appear normal again, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, for the excellent review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
When I first read it I thought you were insinuating that someone was weird. Read it again and thought it was about meeting some at a show or bizarre. So it was like reading two very different poems. Either way, I enjoyed it. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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When I first read it I thought you were insinuating that someone was weird. Read it again and thought it was about meeting some at a show or bizarre. So it was like reading two very different poems. Either way, I enjoyed it. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry was in good form, Bill.
The artwork was bizarre and fit right in
with your interesting word choices. Someone
heretofore not thought to be bizarre appears
and one has to deal with it.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Your contest entry was in good form, Bill.
The artwork was bizarre and fit right in
with your interesting word choices. Someone
heretofore not thought to be bizarre appears
and one has to deal with it.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Bill,
This lune seems to tell of a love that came from an unexpected place. Sometimes bizarre can become strangely normal and real.
The artwork surely shows the bizarre or surreal. It looks like humans hidden among mushrooms and acorns.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Hi Bill,
This lune seems to tell of a love that came from an unexpected place. Sometimes bizarre can become strangely normal and real.
The artwork surely shows the bizarre or surreal. It looks like humans hidden among mushrooms and acorns.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Joan
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No problem, Bill.
Joan
Comment from lyenochka
That's a good interpretation of that picture. It's always reassuring when one sees normality among the bizarre and perhaps that would signal the change for better. Best wishes in the lune contest!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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That's a good interpretation of that picture. It's always reassuring when one sees normality among the bizarre and perhaps that would signal the change for better. Best wishes in the lune contest!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Helen.
Comment from Spitfire
A really great entry, Bill. You made good use of alliteration with 'bizarre' and 'begins'. Also 'new now'. An interesting art choice which illustrates the verbal thought expressed in your lune.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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A really great entry, Bill. You made good use of alliteration with 'bizarre' and 'begins'. Also 'new now'. An interesting art choice which illustrates the verbal thought expressed in your lune.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Shari
