Shavon's Combat For Survival 1
Another part to my fiction3 total reviews
Comment from Maria Millsaps
The battle to live is real, mainly when one is unconscious. What is interesting about being in this state of consciousness is that you can travel between life and death, heaven and earth, and remember. Very moving story.
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The battle to live is real, mainly when one is unconscious. What is interesting about being in this state of consciousness is that you can travel between life and death, heaven and earth, and remember. Very moving story.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
This part was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This part was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
Comment from royowen
I like the way you're weaving your plot, this faze of semi to fully unconscious can be a vital time in connections in these types of stories, and grandparents are sometimes a great connect to the process of writing, well done, grate job, blessings Roy
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I like the way you're weaving your plot, this faze of semi to fully unconscious can be a vital time in connections in these types of stories, and grandparents are sometimes a great connect to the process of writing, well done, grate job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
