Worth Pausing
Make time--even if it's just a moment.2 total reviews
Comment from Celyn
This definitely fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem so well done. It gets straight to the point too which makes it amusing. It takes me longer than 'a pause' to write a haiku so I am impressed if you wrote this one quickly.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This definitely fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem so well done. It gets straight to the point too which makes it amusing. It takes me longer than 'a pause' to write a haiku so I am impressed if you wrote this one quickly.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Celyn, thank you for your review and well-wishes. Some days ideas come faster than others.
Comment from papa55mike
If we could take those moments to jot down a few lines to see how many poems we could write. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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If we could take those moments to jot down a few lines to see how many poems we could write. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Mike, thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked my poem.
Have a blessed day!
