A Fathers Grieving Heartache.
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Comment from papa55mike
We can be trapped in our own pit of misery but all we have to do is take His hand. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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We can be trapped in our own pit of misery but all we have to do is take His hand. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thanks for stopping by Mike much appreciate it have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Moon baby
I really like the play on words and the depth of meaning each line contains within it. Your choice of Artwork is perfect for this poem as a person knotted like a pretzel could only bring to mind one thing: pain. A kind of pain that only time will lessen or become bearable to live with.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I really like the play on words and the depth of meaning each line contains within it. Your choice of Artwork is perfect for this poem as a person knotted like a pretzel could only bring to mind one thing: pain. A kind of pain that only time will lessen or become bearable to live with.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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"Listen to My Pain"
Later and thanks.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Grief is a constant companion when you lose your child. Your choice of words ,comparing it to the sea and drowning, is how you feel in the beginning with wave after wave and not being able to get your footing. Thank you for sharing. I am at least able to better stay afloat but their are still waves. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Grief is a constant companion when you lose your child. Your choice of words ,comparing it to the sea and drowning, is how you feel in the beginning with wave after wave and not being able to get your footing. Thank you for sharing. I am at least able to better stay afloat but their are still waves. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thanks and keep your "Moonbeams"
Shining!
Doctor Ricky 1024