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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written Tanka poem. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written Tanka poem. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Teri, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really like this poem and the wonderful package you presented for us. The eyes on the lady you chose are captivating and mysterious. Your poem's words made us feel that. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I really like this poem and the wonderful package you presented for us. The eyes on the lady you chose are captivating and mysterious. Your poem's words made us feel that. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from lyenochka
A beautiful tanka which starts with the physical blue eyes and pivots in the middle to emotional yearning in the "seas of longing" and tying back to the blue eyes which recalls the blue skies and "voluptuous" waves of the sea.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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A beautiful tanka which starts with the physical blue eyes and pivots in the middle to emotional yearning in the "seas of longing" and tying back to the blue eyes which recalls the blue skies and "voluptuous" waves of the sea.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Big sister, as always, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day. Love you.
Marival
Comment from Ricky1024
"Treading Water"
A Club Challenge Tanka.
4/7/5/7/6
Colour emphasize Turquoise and Blue.
Falling in Love within the Beautiful Turquoise Skies of her eyes.
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Rich in Theme and design.
Read and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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"Treading Water"
A Club Challenge Tanka.
4/7/5/7/6
Colour emphasize Turquoise and Blue.
Falling in Love within the Beautiful Turquoise Skies of her eyes.
...
Rich in Theme and design.
Read and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka Poem- EXCELLENT picture presentation- beautiful eyes etc--good flow describing the eyes as a body of water- nice good job- still treading water- did I say nice eyes?? Lol
Good job. AP
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka Poem- EXCELLENT picture presentation- beautiful eyes etc--good flow describing the eyes as a body of water- nice good job- still treading water- did I say nice eyes?? Lol
Good job. AP
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Word Weaver