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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Julie G1
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Well done. This poem effectively expressed a concise imagery, well handled. The language chosen was apt. Great effort. I hope you keep on composing such verse.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    Thanks
Comment from poetwatch
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Every time the wind blows a whisper of sound is created, Sholessjo. Not many can hear it but many do feel it. As time passes gray dust and sprinkles some on your hair, you see the age of wisdom. Thank you for sharing a good poem.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
    Thank you