Tanka Collection
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I see some alliteration in this poem, and it works beautifully and isn't forced. Once again, your poem is beautifully written, and it's accompanied with a complete package. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I see some alliteration in this poem, and it works beautifully and isn't forced. Once again, your poem is beautifully written, and it's accompanied with a complete package. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Barbara, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from Ricky1024
This Tanka speaks as if in Liquified Dreams.
Flowing along nicely with eager arms awaiting along the riverbank's sand.
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The Adjective and Objective Concepts were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This Tanka speaks as if in Liquified Dreams.
Flowing along nicely with eager arms awaiting along the riverbank's sand.
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The Adjective and Objective Concepts were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ricky, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Manyoshu poem- excellent picture presentation- angel floating- ties to the poem well- (you are going to make me look up Whooshing? Lol) poem paints a soft picture- good job
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I like your Manyoshu poem- excellent picture presentation- angel floating- ties to the poem well- (you are going to make me look up Whooshing? Lol) poem paints a soft picture- good job
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
Again, a very good poem. You do an excellent job of introducing unusual forms of poetry (maybe unusual to what we Fanstory and are used to).
I've come to terms with my depression--I fight to not make it my boss.
Keep writing, Gypsy. You are a great t member of Fanstory , and a good friend to me, because you understand...
Blessings,
Cindy. )
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Gypsy,
Again, a very good poem. You do an excellent job of introducing unusual forms of poetry (maybe unusual to what we Fanstory and are used to).
I've come to terms with my depression--I fight to not make it my boss.
Keep writing, Gypsy. You are a great t member of Fanstory , and a good friend to me, because you understand...
Blessings,
Cindy. )
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Cindy, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
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You too, Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good alliteration. I especially liked:
swooshing and whooshing
(Nice. I can hear it.)
Lovely whimsical photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good alliteration. I especially liked:
swooshing and whooshing
(Nice. I can hear it.)
Lovely whimsical photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Margaret, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from lyenochka
The wind is really capricious and I liked the weaving, whether it's the wind that is weaving or another entity weaving the wind, the alliteration is reminiscent of the wind and it is accented even more with the onomatopoeic words.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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The wind is really capricious and I liked the weaving, whether it's the wind that is weaving or another entity weaving the wind, the alliteration is reminiscent of the wind and it is accented even more with the onomatopoeic words.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, big sister. I always appreciate you for taking the time to read and review my poems. Have an awesome day. I love you.
MariVal
Comment from royowen
An excellent poem Gypsy, with great alliteration with the Ws and the great ooshing sounds of the third line, and Lo and behold more alliteration with the C sounds, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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An excellent poem Gypsy, with great alliteration with the Ws and the great ooshing sounds of the third line, and Lo and behold more alliteration with the C sounds, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Word Weaver
poets stitch a quilt of joy, love, laughter, and tears
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Well done