Bullying Should Be Stopped
The bully's victims are sensitive.3 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem has a strong message all should read
and believe--especially in schools. You did a great
job, Mystery Author. You described the problem and
offered a reasonable solution. Your image choice
worked well and your words were well thought out
with good flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Your poem has a strong message all should read
and believe--especially in schools. You did a great
job, Mystery Author. You described the problem and
offered a reasonable solution. Your image choice
worked well and your words were well thought out
with good flow.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Very well said. I totally agree that it must be stopped. But I must say, I feel bullies are actually insecure. Actually, I believe that when they bully someone it makes them feel superior . Why? I do not know.
My message to bullies would be: Get some confidence and get a life. Stop trying to break mine! Thank you for sharing. Write On
Good Luck
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Very well said. I totally agree that it must be stopped. But I must say, I feel bullies are actually insecure. Actually, I believe that when they bully someone it makes them feel superior . Why? I do not know.
My message to bullies would be: Get some confidence and get a life. Stop trying to break mine! Thank you for sharing. Write On
Good Luck
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review! I respect your opinion. Well said.
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YW. Good Luck
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I agree with you about bullies are insecure!
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Lol, Dang bullies
Comment from J L Graves
I agree with your poem. Bullying should be stopped. Your message throughout your poem is clear and is on point. And, you have the required 10 lines. I'm wondering if you're going to eventually add another stanza and write about how victims stand up for themselves? Just a thought for you.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I agree with your poem. Bullying should be stopped. Your message throughout your poem is clear and is on point. And, you have the required 10 lines. I'm wondering if you're going to eventually add another stanza and write about how victims stand up for themselves? Just a thought for you.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your excellent review!
