Unhealing Scars
It is up to the doer of hurt to make amends.5 total reviews
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
That is very beautiful. It is very very deep and captures the feelings
Well illustrated. May you find peace. We all need peace in our soul in order to feel joy. Thank you for sharing.
Good Luck
Write On and keep sharing
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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That is very beautiful. It is very very deep and captures the feelings
Well illustrated. May you find peace. We all need peace in our soul in order to feel joy. Thank you for sharing.
Good Luck
Write On and keep sharing
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciated.
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YW
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your poem in ten lines. It takes a lot of nerve to make amends for hurts inflicted in the past. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed your poem in ten lines. It takes a lot of nerve to make amends for hurts inflicted in the past. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Wow. This piece of work is very deep and thought provoking.
You wrote this from a perspective that we don't usually see.
Well done master Poet. Well done
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Wow. This piece of work is very deep and thought provoking.
You wrote this from a perspective that we don't usually see.
Well done master Poet. Well done
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the feedback.
Comment from Frank Malley
I do not think that one "summons the will to make amends." Isn't the choice to make amends an outcome of confronting and understanding the wrong in what one chose to do?
On the other hand, will is needed to overcome the shame that is part of the responsibility, so in that sense this works. I like the idea of "secret scars," and its two esses sound. I think "craved" was meant to be 'carved.'
This is an excellent poem about guilt, a topic that has empowered endlessly the written and spoken word.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I do not think that one "summons the will to make amends." Isn't the choice to make amends an outcome of confronting and understanding the wrong in what one chose to do?
On the other hand, will is needed to overcome the shame that is part of the responsibility, so in that sense this works. I like the idea of "secret scars," and its two esses sound. I think "craved" was meant to be 'carved.'
This is an excellent poem about guilt, a topic that has empowered endlessly the written and spoken word.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Yes, thanks, it should be carved. I will edit. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a skillfully written poem, and I love the title. The artwork you added is perfect for the subject of the writing. I enjoyed reading your poetry. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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This is a skillfully written poem, and I love the title. The artwork you added is perfect for the subject of the writing. I enjoyed reading your poetry. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
