Comment from Julie G1

Excellent

Well done. This reader enjoyed your clear, concise message, conveyed very well. The graphic also worked well for this reader. Keep on writing such enjoyable verse. A work in faith.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for your review.

Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

wow thank you for sharing, and a 10 line contest poem, I love the words, they differently flow evenly, don't know the grammar needed in poems as I write science fiction and fantasy, good luck and will be watching to see who wins.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Celyn

Excellent

I like this poem as the rhyming is good, even the near rhyme of mind and sign, and the rhythm is consistent. The only thing I don't quite get is why the sunlight is tainted and just what Earth's elation with an eternal sign means. I am probably missing some important imagery - sorry.
Good luck with it anyway
Celyn

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for your review. I was thinking about clouds tainting or blocking the sun and Earth being elated with the sky, however God decided to "paint" it that day.

Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot

Excellent

Beautiful! Our Lord's perfect beauty defined revealing his promise. I enjoyed this.
Good Luck. Thank you for sharing. Write On. Share On
Very well written and illustrated!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for your review.

reply by Barbara Peabody Pouliot on 15-Nov-2022

YW

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

I loved this little poem. The sky is the canvas for God to paint surreal pictures.The picture changes every minute and sunset and sunrise is dramatic.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022

Thanks for your review.