Nightfall Of The Mind
This is a poem on aging.2 total reviews
Comment from Celyn
This is a very atmospheric poem that has great imagery in it - well done. I presume that it is about retrieving memories or not as the case might be but do correct me if I am wrong. I like the idea of 'the nightfall of the mind' and the use of black, white and grey.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This is a very atmospheric poem that has great imagery in it - well done. I presume that it is about retrieving memories or not as the case might be but do correct me if I am wrong. I like the idea of 'the nightfall of the mind' and the use of black, white and grey.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Celyn.
Poems with colors in them
can have such symbolic
meaning to them. Thank you
for visiting my page.
Blessings and all the best to
you. ~
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-line poem, Nightfall of the Mind, follows the poet's description of the fading and deconstructing of what is perceived. Perception itself thins to a transparency of nothingness.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This ten-line poem, Nightfall of the Mind, follows the poet's description of the fading and deconstructing of what is perceived. Perception itself thins to a transparency of nothingness.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Bill. I was trying
to remember a celebrity's
name yesterday, and I felt
like all my, "brain circuits,"
would go into overload, lol!
Many blessings and all the
best to you & your family. ~
