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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was like nature's royal ballet. I love the line about the stargazer lily's bowing down. This poem appealed to my senses. The colors and the scents that were brought to life through your words. Very well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This was like nature's royal ballet. I love the line about the stargazer lily's bowing down. This poem appealed to my senses. The colors and the scents that were brought to life through your words. Very well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Ms Gretchen, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Your kind words mean a lot to me. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Word Weaver
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I bet they really bow to the regal moon. Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us. I could feel the summer breeze as I read this poem. Your poems are an experience that you feel as reading.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I bet they really bow to the regal moon. Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us. I could feel the summer breeze as I read this poem. Your poems are an experience that you feel as reading.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy poet
a word weaver of hearts and souls
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for the notes.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective imagery.
-I like the concept of the moon being tangled in the breeze.
-The middle lines acts as a pivot to the lilies
and how they will receive you at your door.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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-Lovely images and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Thanks for the notes.
-You wrote a very good poem with effective imagery.
-I like the concept of the moon being tangled in the breeze.
-The middle lines acts as a pivot to the lilies
and how they will receive you at your door.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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You are very welcome, Gypsy. It is an interesting form.
Comment from royowen
I like the mixture in the narrative that you manage to pull off here Gypsy, your whole writing persona revolves around your ability with verbal dexterity, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I like the mixture in the narrative that you manage to pull off here Gypsy, your whole writing persona revolves around your ability with verbal dexterity, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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Welcome Gypsy,
Comment from Ricky1024
Now I do know here in my state of New Jersey.
And, just last week.
It started with a half moon. Followed by a half moon.
And, then several nights of full Moons!
Now, I can't remember the Moon being visible so many times in one week!
Yes, and in so many ways.
But since it's November.
We are now going into what's called "The Hunter's Moon"
Or "The Red Moon"
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Now I do know here in my state of New Jersey.
And, just last week.
It started with a half moon. Followed by a half moon.
And, then several nights of full Moons!
Now, I can't remember the Moon being visible so many times in one week!
Yes, and in so many ways.
But since it's November.
We are now going into what's called "The Hunter's Moon"
Or "The Red Moon"
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I like using the full moon names, like hunter's moon, love it.
Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great poem. I get the atmosphere of a lazy evening, fragrance of flowers around and a disposition to have a restful nap...
Very well written indeed.
Mario
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Great poem. I get the atmosphere of a lazy evening, fragrance of flowers around and a disposition to have a restful nap...
Very well written indeed.
Mario
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from lyenochka
Love how you always know to invoke all the senses from the sight of the moonlight that directs to the beloved's door, to the fragrance of the lilies, and the feeling of the breeze!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Love how you always know to invoke all the senses from the sight of the moonlight that directs to the beloved's door, to the fragrance of the lilies, and the feeling of the breeze!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, big sister, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day. Love you.
MariVal
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the way your poem flows, so smoothly. The color and presentation are great, too. Not many poets can write a poem that links the moon and lilies together in a meaningful way.
Great job.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I like the way your poem flows, so smoothly. The color and presentation are great, too. Not many poets can write a poem that links the moon and lilies together in a meaningful way.
Great job.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Cerulean Moon, looks good and captures the time of a darkened evening and the still, cool moon's illuminating glow upon the scene. ...................................................................
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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This tanka, Cerulean Moon, looks good and captures the time of a darkened evening and the still, cool moon's illuminating glow upon the scene. ...................................................................
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this since Japanese poetic forms always catch my attention. Thank you for the explanation of what a manyoshu was. Maybe I will try one soon. I caught an end rhyme with breeze/lilies. Nice share.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I liked reading this since Japanese poetic forms always catch my attention. Thank you for the explanation of what a manyoshu was. Maybe I will try one soon. I caught an end rhyme with breeze/lilies. Nice share.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy