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The Rogadoo contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
I would like to take this opportunity to express gratitude to a gifted poet who is able to speak profundity with passion and clarity. You were able to grab your readers at the genesis of the piece and and strategically maneuver us through the drama and deposit us gently on the threshold of a groundbreaking discovery. All the while, you provided rhythm, pace, and sequencing with the rhyming scheme of a true literary artist. Very Well Done!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I would like to take this opportunity to express gratitude to a gifted poet who is able to speak profundity with passion and clarity. You were able to grab your readers at the genesis of the piece and and strategically maneuver us through the drama and deposit us gently on the threshold of a groundbreaking discovery. All the while, you provided rhythm, pace, and sequencing with the rhyming scheme of a true literary artist. Very Well Done!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Dr. Nad. I really appreciate the generous rating and kind comments, my friend. You made my night. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.
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I apologize for being so incredibly late with this response. For the last year and a half to two years, I have been very inconsistent with my appearance on fan story. It doesn't diminish my appreciation for but I have had a number of tasks that have kept me extremely busy. You are most welcome for the review. I appreciate the joy I had reading and reviewing their work.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good effort with this prompt. The text is a great size. The story is told well in the verses, but the fighting scene is a bit rushed. The visual is perfect. Did you make it? The 4th line in the first verse needs an "in" before between. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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This is a good effort with this prompt. The text is a great size. The story is told well in the verses, but the fighting scene is a bit rushed. The visual is perfect. Did you make it? The 4th line in the first verse needs an "in" before between. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I made it a little rushed so it wouldn't be too lengthy. Yes, I actually created the picture myself from 5 different pictures. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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The visual alone deserved a star. You are welcome.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
I rather enjoyed your poem. It must have taken a bit of time to come up with the Rogadoo. It's certainly the most unusual creature I've ever come across. I like your imagination. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Hello Author,
I rather enjoyed your poem. It must have taken a bit of time to come up with the Rogadoo. It's certainly the most unusual creature I've ever come across. I like your imagination. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Tom. The picture actually took a lot longer to create than the piece did. I love playing in my art program nearly as much as writing. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Caroline1626
This is so cute! This would be fun to make into a childrens book! There is alot of imagination behind it. If I honest, I was skeptical when I just saw the picture, but after reading the poem, I love it!!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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This is so cute! This would be fun to make into a childrens book! There is alot of imagination behind it. If I honest, I was skeptical when I just saw the picture, but after reading the poem, I love it!!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Caroline. I'm glad you made it past the picture. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
