Personal Reflections
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Comment from Raul1
I like the rhythm of your poem as it moves pretty fast and good use of your two letters. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on winning the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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I like the rhythm of your poem as it moves pretty fast and good use of your two letters. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on winning the contest!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you for a wonderful review and a super rating. The beautiful stars are greatly appreciated.
Wendy
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You're welcome!
Comment from jaded831
This type of poetry it is hard to grasp meaning, but each word was skillfully placed to create a work of art. I need to read them all, but your poem truly stands out. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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This type of poetry it is hard to grasp meaning, but each word was skillfully placed to create a work of art. I need to read them all, but your poem truly stands out. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and appreciation of my poem, and also for your good wishes. All are appreciated very much.
Comment from Kaiku
There is a line in macbeth, "what three things provides 'p' in thee." As I read your 'perfectly resonating poem, remembrance produced rather predictive pride.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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There is a line in macbeth, "what three things provides 'p' in thee." As I read your 'perfectly resonating poem, remembrance produced rather predictive pride.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you! What a very clever review! I appreciate it.
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Certainly.
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-letter poem, Personal Reflections, attacks the challenge and, in my view, does the best job of addressing this crazy thing we do here and keeping the discipline of two - letter words. Nice.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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This two-letter poem, Personal Reflections, attacks the challenge and, in my view, does the best job of addressing this crazy thing we do here and keeping the discipline of two - letter words. Nice.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks Bill. I enjoyed your review a lot. Appreciated.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is THE best entry I have read to this two-letter prompt. You have done a great job. The text is a nice size for reading. Your poem actually makes sense. Your beginning and ending lines are stellar. The visual is okay. Good luck in the contest. I would vote for you.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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This is THE best entry I have read to this two-letter prompt. You have done a great job. The text is a nice size for reading. Your poem actually makes sense. Your beginning and ending lines are stellar. The visual is okay. Good luck in the contest. I would vote for you.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate this wonderful review!
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You are welcome.
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Thank you for your vote! Appreciated greatly!
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Of course, hope you place in the top three.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I enjoyed the poem. You chose good letters to provide a sonorous rendition, and the result you were seeking:
Providing reading pleasure
was indeed a purpose well-realised! Kate xx
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed the poem. You chose good letters to provide a sonorous rendition, and the result you were seeking:
Providing reading pleasure
was indeed a purpose well-realised! Kate xx
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this excellent review, greatly appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a marvellous job with this, oh yes posting a poem is more than just posting, it should be well presented and edited to perfection, and having said that, even then they develop glitches. This is a great entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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I think you've done a marvellous job with this, oh yes posting a poem is more than just posting, it should be well presented and edited to perfection, and having said that, even then they develop glitches. This is a great entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Roy. I appreciate your fine review.
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Most welcome
Comment from JoannaN
This was indeed a challenge, but you have mastered it. Your poem is nice to read, makes sense, and it also fulfills the harsh criteria :) well done :)))
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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This was indeed a challenge, but you have mastered it. Your poem is nice to read, makes sense, and it also fulfills the harsh criteria :) well done :)))
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Joanna! Lol. Yes, it took a bit of time to get it to make sense, and not just use any old worlds with the required letters.
Comment from lancellot
This is just what the contest was looking for. Your words begin with a P or R, and you do well throughout the entire poem. I can tell that wasn't an easy task.
I wish you luck in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This is just what the contest was looking for. Your words begin with a P or R, and you do well throughout the entire poem. I can tell that wasn't an easy task.
I wish you luck in the voting booth.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your positive review. Greatly appreciated, along with your good wishes. (And yes, it took a while ....)
Comment from prettybluebirds
So, here is another form of poetry. I don't know how you poets remember them all. It is a lovely poem, both in style and words. I enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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So, here is another form of poetry. I don't know how you poets remember them all. It is a lovely poem, both in style and words. I enjoyed reading it and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Lol. Thank you! I don't count myself a very good poet, and I actually just set it out this way because it seemed to reflect the flow of my thoughts. It's not really a "proper" format. So I love your kind review, and also appreciate your good wishes!
