Entanglement
It is difficult to move on after a heart shattering break up2 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Really tender and empathic
love poem. Some people
swear off any more relationships after having a
tumultuous one. If this is a
true story, best wishes for
a happy lasting union. May
you have success in the
contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Really tender and empathic
love poem. Some people
swear off any more relationships after having a
tumultuous one. If this is a
true story, best wishes for
a happy lasting union. May
you have success in the
contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging review. Sort of a true story.
Comment from Celyn
This poem is full of emotion and fulfills the requirements of a rondel poem well. The rhyming is generally very good but I do think that using 'admire' as a noun is not so good. Perhaps you could have come up with another rhyme there.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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This poem is full of emotion and fulfills the requirements of a rondel poem well. The rhyming is generally very good but I do think that using 'admire' as a noun is not so good. Perhaps you could have come up with another rhyme there.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I will see if I can think of another rhyme instead of admire.
