Lords Of The Glen
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "New Orders"A A new threat arises to the north.
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Comment from Dr. Von
Well-written transitions in this chapter. I like the clear statements describing the tensions of war. The exhaustion and determination are expressed with words that help the reader envision the landscape. There are no gaps in the storyline. This is very tightly woven. Great work. Your writing strategy is reflected in the battle strategy.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Well-written transitions in this chapter. I like the clear statements describing the tensions of war. The exhaustion and determination are expressed with words that help the reader envision the landscape. There are no gaps in the storyline. This is very tightly woven. Great work. Your writing strategy is reflected in the battle strategy.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sir! I hope the story line holds your attention. Your reviews are wonderful!
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Your writing always holds interest. You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story keeps getting better. It's like you have gotten into the groove now and really belting out the chapters. I am enjoying this fantasy story of yours, and look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Your story keeps getting better. It's like you have gotten into the groove now and really belting out the chapters. I am enjoying this fantasy story of yours, and look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I am glad that you are sticking with it. Your reviews are always honest and helpful!
