A Fathers Grieving Heartache.
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Re-Slipping On My Heartstrings"My loss of my only son Jason.
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Comment from royowen
There's nothing above the relational side of humanity that connects with God on high, under whom all things in Heaven and Earth are bound together, this is a comprehensive post Ricky, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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There's nothing above the relational side of humanity that connects with God on high, under whom all things in Heaven and Earth are bound together, this is a comprehensive post Ricky, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thanks Roy much appreciated.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Well done
Comment from MaykaylaMaisha
-Very heartfelt
- I felt the desperation, sadness, and pain, and hope everything is okay
- I would make shorten and condense the piece
-The middle stanzas really flow
-Felt like an unnecessary amount of questions marks
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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-Very heartfelt
- I felt the desperation, sadness, and pain, and hope everything is okay
- I would make shorten and condense the piece
-The middle stanzas really flow
-Felt like an unnecessary amount of questions marks
Comment Written 13-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment from Jay Squires
Another touching prose/poem, from the mouth and heart of our resident Doctor! A few things:
God, �§an't You see?
Its over and over again! [Something as short as this, you really must make sure your editing is perfect, and get rid of the HTML garbage. That way you get the best, most direct response from your reader.]
Should I say another series of prayers of Amen's again? ["Amen's" shouldn't have an apostrophe. It's plural not possessive.]
Onward, Ricky!
Jay
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Another touching prose/poem, from the mouth and heart of our resident Doctor! A few things:
God, �§an't You see?
Its over and over again! [Something as short as this, you really must make sure your editing is perfect, and get rid of the HTML garbage. That way you get the best, most direct response from your reader.]
Should I say another series of prayers of Amen's again? ["Amen's" shouldn't have an apostrophe. It's plural not possessive.]
Onward, Ricky!
Jay
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2022
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Thanks caught that one before.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
your mission my son is keep on going promoting goog in the name of your son by getting family and friends to sign their donor cards to help live and pass life onto others and blood donors are needed as the holidays are upon us again. sSome places pay for blood and plazma for cancer.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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your mission my son is keep on going promoting goog in the name of your son by getting family and friends to sign their donor cards to help live and pass life onto others and blood donors are needed as the holidays are upon us again. sSome places pay for blood and plazma for cancer.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2022
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Thanks country writer for understanding is fully.
Doctor Ricky1024
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